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The Tide of the Maelstrom

From seas of green, to darkened woe The winds do blow the grief In Maelstrom's tide, to havens low We waken death from sleep Harkened to the evening star The evil calls the foe Into the tide of the Maelstrom Into the deep below Dark haven, cruel Raven Where shall you then depart? The whole ship has sunken Into the whirlpool's heart The moon will shine from up above Till darkness ends the light The moaning mist of deadened love The sad, lost wings of flight Demon waters drown the glee Of all remaining hope The gift to hear, the gift to see Left us long ago Dark haven, cruel Raven Where shall you then depart? The whole ship has sunken Into the whirlpool's heart Dark haven, cruel Raven! Where shall you fall tonight? The whole world is shaken In Maelstrom's sick delight 6/17/13 -experimenting on this verse; trying to make a four part acapella...wish me luck!!

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Date: 1/22/2014 12:37:00 PM
WOW ....THIS IS RIGHT UP MY ALLEY POE POSSESSED AND FLOWS LIKE CRIMSON CRIMSON TREACLE...I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT....IT ROCKS LAURA xXx
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Date: 6/23/2013 2:55:00 PM
You don't need luck Laura, you have geuine talent & inspiration; just love the trust - this gloomy & exhilerating composition is rife with determinism & daring - I respect the ancient use of language in this write too - J.A.B. %
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Date: 6/19/2013 5:28:00 PM
Laura, glad to see you here. Figured end of semester or vacation or something. Anyway, the raven appears to me to be in a bit of a predicament. I think of the unseen island or another ship that is there but unseen. That is not always the case, but when the raven is steadfast, these temporary miracles could happen. However, the maelstrom does await us all in some form or another. I think you put your heart into your work, and I love reading it. For me it has an unusual incite. Thanks.
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Date: 6/19/2013 9:40:00 AM
Loved this..nicely written.
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Date: 6/19/2013 3:20:00 AM
Dear Laura, you have written a really good poem ... but feel a little sad and "dark" ... - Hope you are doing well. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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