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The Thunder Clouds Are Rolling In...

The thunder clouds are rolling in Midday sky as dark as night Goosebumps prickle across my skin It’s now as dark as sin From the rapidly fading light The thunder clouds are rolling in I wish the rain would just begin And relieve some of my fright Goosebumps prickle across my skin I feel the flutter deep within It fills me with delight The thunder clouds are rolling in Oh dear rain, where have you been I wished for you with all my might Goosebumps prickle across my skin Now everything will be alright I’m so happy I could spin The thunder clouds are rolling in Goosebumps prickle across my skin

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Date: 6/15/2010 12:12:00 PM
WOW! Tirzah,What a wonderful villanelle, this is a very creative and terrific piece. I love your skill. This is one of my favorite. Keep writing, I wish you all the best in the contest. you are one of the best brains on the Soup. love, ‘Leke
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Date: 6/15/2010 8:20:00 AM
A great write, I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. Caryl
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Date: 6/15/2010 4:12:00 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest
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Date: 6/14/2010 7:36:00 PM
yes! Tirzah! I believe in the negative eons that emit from thunder and water splitting on impact... often, I sit by waterfalls, natural and mandmade to breathe in that highly oxygenated air, energizing my mind! good work! jimbo
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Date: 6/14/2010 5:37:00 PM
Kind of catchy, nice one, enjoyed this one...P.D.
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Date: 6/14/2010 3:46:00 PM
Great descriptive write and well planned Villanelle...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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