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the things not seen

a flag is suppose to wave
but it cannot without 
the invisible force
of the wind
and waters they flow
but they cannot
without a current
love is suppose to grow
but it cannot without desire
a lamp is suppose to glow
but it cannot without a fire
for somethings to work 
invisible things are required
it is the forces that we cannot see
that controls the world
by a large degree
the power of love and chemestry
the forces that are, and let things be 
they live inside of you and me
it is as simple as the difference
between the brain and the heart
one exist inside of you 
and the other is the invisable part
a heart is suppose to love
but it cannot without it's invisible part

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  1. Date: 9/6/2012 10:51:00 AM
    Love your take and insight on what is visible and what is invisible . A lot of thought went into writing this master piece. Love it. phyl

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 5:22:00 AM
    very well written,,,, you have a blessed day ;}

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 5:52:00 AM
    Situation...original insight! I like! Jimbo

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 2:24:00 PM
    Congrats, TS. Excellent. Great job. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 7:15:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "father & beyond" contest TS. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 5:37:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win!!!!

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 5:20:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win, makes one think xx

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 10:22:00 PM
    Congrats on your wonderful win with your heartfelt and thought provoking write! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 9:59:00 PM
    Oh, My.. Situation, oh my... you made me read this one ya..., Congratulations for your awesom poem. Thank you for supporting my contest;-) Good night~PD

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 6:36:00 PM
    Enthralling verse with the seen and unseen taking me through these lines of yours. I neverthought of this before but you have done an outstanding job pulling it all together. Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 4:16:00 PM
    HA,,, this reminds me of a movie I've seen... called hollow... :-)~ LOVE PD

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 8:57:00 PM
    Great pen Sitch!

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 8:10:00 PM excellent write the flow and the meaning of this piece of art of yours..!!!