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Poetic Hyperbole

A blue sky glints like a sapphire embedded with gold filigree and poetic hyperbole. A teal twilight morphs into dusk inking cobalt silhouettes black, and welcoming owls and bats back. Shadows slip between dark creases, sculpting shapes that blend with the night at the fringes of dark and light. And a crimson sun bleeds scarlet, sinking into a sea of fire as its magenta rays expire. Darkness descends like a black cloak encrusted with glittering stars, while Venus lights the way for Mars. And a full moon shines high above illuminating half the Earth, till dawn announces the sun's rebirth. (Rhyme) 1/25/2015

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Date: 5/25/2018 8:30:00 PM
Enchanting imagery, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/26/2018 8:45:00 AM
Thanks Line, your comments and support are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/7/2015 7:27:00 PM
this is excellent work, so descriptive, your voice is at its peak here. i notice that 'morph' appears in many of your poems so far, is it a word you particularly like?
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/8/2015 10:03:00 AM
Thanks Steven, yes morph means change and that is what I try to do, (change or enhance your point of view) with my words. Emile.
Date: 1/30/2015 10:47:00 AM
Fabulous poem! Sharp, iridescent images. I love it. Thanks, Carol
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/31/2015 3:31:00 PM
Thanks Carol, your kind words are very appreciated. Emile.
Date: 1/25/2015 12:24:00 PM
I ve noticed you write a lot about scars and sufferings... and you never lack for new ways to express your thoughts.. good pen Emile... lov, nad!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/25/2015 12:45:00 PM
Thanks Nadiya, your support is always appreciated. Emile.
Date: 1/25/2015 10:53:00 AM
Very nice pen Emile! A 7 from me! I truly enjoyed reading your poetic piece, my dear friend. Have a very lovely day! God bless you! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D. ^O^"
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/25/2015 11:28:00 AM
Thank you so much Dorian, your support is greatly appreciated. Emile.

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