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The Sun , the Stars ,And the Moon, and Their Envy of You

The sun hid behind mountains, afraid to show it's rays, when it got a glimpse of your smile, it said enviously, "no way!!", Did you see her smile??, and it's rays??? only to issue a warning to the stars, and the moon, of YOU heading their way. The moon so assumed with it's different phases and such, soon asked, "what's the deal with her,.... sunshine???, she can't phase me, let alone try to touch. Then in a brisk, memorable tone, you spoke, and the moon,envious too, said oops!!!, spoke to soon, I'm gone, too!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/24/2012 5:57:00 PM
Love the funny side!! Quite an interesting write!!! Thanks for sharing this Jesu... Love Diana
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