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The storm

                                                  The storm roars and exhale
                                              is it Mother Earth last convulsions

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  1. Date: 11/12/2012 3:16:00 AM
    Nice work! Sure is making me anxious, all this talk about the world ending. Thanks for sharing. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 10:35:00 PM
    nice Haiku friend Laila :) have a blessed day! hugs!

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 4:11:00 AM
    Beautiful piece.

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 9:32:00 PM
    Powerful haiku Laila, so good to have you back, I missed you, welcome back, vie

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 7:50:00 PM
    I like how this describes a storm and how you refer to it as having convulsions. Puts a human touch to it. love phyl

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 7:36:00 PM

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 5:13:00 PM
    OOh, my you just became a new favorite poet of mine... I wish to be alive during this time... HOLD ON!! What am I talking about. I have a long life ahead of me. This is the same date on my milk carton... LOL...Now I know what it means... love this haiku... it needs a title ... Haiku does not fit it... ... I gave all my haiku a title on purpose... always~ PD

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 4:12:00 PM
    well I agree with Arild. BBQ on the 22nd, I got the steaks and beer... lovely to see you writing on here.. Give those 2 next to you a hug from me... Michael

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 4:01:00 PM
    nice work you have penned! thanks for contacting me so i can see it. I don't think it is the end. lol

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 3:58:00 PM
    nice write Laila

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 3:05:00 PM
    I like the topic that you have chosen on which to write your work..We will only know if this prediction is true after the date given..As far as it being a real Haiku I can't help you on that..You can just type in Haiku on your search engine and get some very helpful information on better how to write one...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by my work..I appreciate you stopping there..Sara

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 1:42:00 PM
    New York probably felt like it was the last convulsion, yet she took another breath. In the process she took our breath away. It is amazing how 3 lines can conjure up so many images.

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 12:06:00 PM
    A writer of all, a master of none but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Laila. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 11:48:00 AM
    I do love haiku 's and I do like yours,,,,, I have written a few,,, though I haven't posted them,,, just because I don't think they are true form haiku's ;}

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 11:38:00 AM
    great take on the Mayan calendar Laila Rollo

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 11:29:00 AM
    So nice that you post a Haiku poem today Laila. - I like it very much, well done. - Let's hope we can celebrate new year 2013. - Love you - many hugggs from mom :) :) :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 11:07:00 AM
    Lol..I say BBQ on 22nd:-)~

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 11:03:00 AM
    12.21.2012---is that date?good haiku.