The Soul I Sold ---:2

If I seem down forgive me frowns I carry around live in me you may say, ya' see right through me your words untrue, renew me the hurt I’ve learned brews in me if only you could re-design me take time rewind, refine me recreate the mold, without lies I’ve told; give back the soul I sold. ®~JSLambert

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Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 9/21/2011 2:02:00 AM

this is another hot one... of course.."the hurt i've learned brews in me....if only you could re-design me...luvin it...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2011 9:46:00 AM

This reminded me of some song from long ago. I can't remember its name now. It really is like music,& I can see it being shaped into a cool song! Off to the gym now, but I enjoyed being able to see this one on my way out! Oh, I just noticed you labeled it Lyric. I used to think that form meant lyics like to music, and in this case it truly would fit that description. It was not until just recently that I discovered lyric meant "showing one's emotions" you certainly did that too with this poem.

John Aaron Green

Date: 6/22/2011 8:01:00 PM

even through the eye of the storm,,,,you were never alone..............great poem....

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/21/2011 4:35:00 AM

wonderful words JS and all u have to do to get it back..though it does not ever leave.. is take back the words u let it go ... simple and easy luv..the power is in the words of the tongue ..always.. words are powerful...this is a powerful piece my friend... thankxx for your many great comments on my poetry.. playing catch up to reply.. house hunting and kitten hunting..luv..oh..

Madeleine Mclaughlin

Date: 6/21/2011 3:48:00 AM

Lovely little lament.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/21/2011 3:33:00 AM

Thanks foryour comments on The father's Day