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The Smitten Sky - One Liner

the wink of the fireflies – twilight blushing

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Date: 12/8/2015 9:29:00 PM

A creative one liner, David! Congrats on your win! Love, KIm

Date: 12/7/2015 6:59:00 AM

Congratulations David.

Date: 12/7/2015 12:49:00 AM

Unique imagery .. Congrats on great win with this amazingly beautiful write david!

Date: 12/6/2015 6:55:00 PM

for me, this was one for top of the podium. Congrats!

Date: 12/6/2015 5:46:00 PM

David, Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Date: 12/6/2015 3:19:00 PM

Don't see too many of those anymore...well done, David...congrats.

Date: 12/6/2015 2:33:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats David:-) hugs Jan xx

Date: 12/6/2015 2:28:00 PM

- Congrats on your great "One Liners Two" image, David !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Date: 12/6/2015 2:25:00 PM

David, Congrats on your one liner TWO win. SKAT

Date: 12/5/2015 7:12:00 PM

wow, this is TRULY a monoku (unlike mine) I LOVE this.

Date: 12/5/2015 5:51:00 PM

Creative and beautiful! Well done, David! #7 Regards // paul

Date: 12/5/2015 4:26:00 PM

beautiful imagery David - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx