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The Shell

sea's sound in the breeze
captured in a pretty shell. . . . 
nature's gift to me

lying on my bed
holding music to my ear. . . . 
I drift out to sea


For Brian Strand's 
VERSE any theme/form max of 8 lines Poetry Contest

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Skat A Date: 5/16/2015 12:34:00 PM don't drift to far Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 5/12/2015 1:30:00 PM LOL,,,,,,, LOVE IT... WHAT KIND OF DREAM WAS IT...HOPE YOU DON'T SINK...SKAT Login to Reply

Olivia Brag Date: 4/27/2014 7:47:00 PM really cool poem Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 10/2/2011 6:27:00 PM Fine write,Andrea.Congrats on your win..... Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 9/30/2011 7:53:00 PM water is soothing! Congrad's Light & Love Login to Reply

Don Johnson Date: 9/30/2011 6:44:00 PM Well done baba top the tree, like an angel there i see, great verse it comes by you, congratulations on it too... Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 9/30/2011 3:49:00 PM Congrats Andrea on your win. I remember this gem of you very well! Login to Reply

Bob Quigley Date: 9/30/2011 2:18:00 PM I really like this one Andrea. Great write Congratulations on your win Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/30/2011 11:30:00 AM Congrats Andrea on a fine first place win with these glorious words ..my friend..honored to share with u luv.. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/30/2011 9:54:00 AM Good morning and congratulations on your 1st Place win in Brian's "Verse" contest Andrea. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 9/30/2011 7:41:00 AM this was very nice.. congrats on your win..cory Login to Reply

Anne Rutherford Date: 5/14/2011 4:39:00 PM Andrea very well done haiku. my compliments on a creative poem. Anne Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/3/2011 7:00:00 AM It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Andrea. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 4/26/2011 7:42:00 PM a great piece enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on My Journey Home. about what you said, no if i did that i would change the whole meaning of the poem, i don't know that much about syles of poetry. i just write them if i try to write a certain kind of poem i would do a very bad job. but thank you anyway. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/26/2011 10:35:00 AM Congratulations on your win in the Dr. Ram's contest Andrea. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Diane Locksley Date: 4/25/2011 4:14:00 PM I've heard that music holding a shell to my ear and it's beautiful just like this poem. Congratulations on your win Andrea. Best to you, Diane Login to Reply

Kyle Kyle Date: 4/25/2011 10:51:00 AM Nice k Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 4/25/2011 9:33:00 AM Wonderful write Andrea . I watched a movie last night called Oceans. It was more of a documentary type of show but your poem reminds me that the ocean plays music all of it's own. love phyl Login to Reply

Jasmine Turner Date: 4/24/2011 11:08:00 AM very calming and thoughtful for a thing in such a little poem Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/24/2011 7:01:00 AM beauty with matching whistles!... so well, done, andie! whooty congrats on the shining award! :) huggs Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 4/24/2011 5:35:00 AM Very special poem, andrea. Just as Joe said, Concise and delicate. U are amazing! Gwendolen Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 4/23/2011 10:54:00 AM I see you have had a win Andrea, i am not surprised this is a delicate concise poem, i am much rewarded by the read. Login to Reply

Peter Churchley Date: 4/22/2011 11:00:00 AM Very nice Haiku's, particulary to 2nd one Login to Reply

Dr Hitendra Mehta Date: 4/22/2011 10:40:00 AM Many congrats Andrea on well desrved big win in Dr Rams contest with this creative piece. Happy easter. - Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/22/2011 8:55:00 AM Congratulations on your win, Andrea! Have a happy Easter with your family. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

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