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It Was Her Poetry Seduced Me

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When Thor struck his hammer upon the flat ground on Earth it was the pieces withstood the blow we named rock, constructs we came to know as the mountains. Even before that time I crossed my fingers wished I'd one day experience ...you. I knew you before heavenly purity grew wings before angels blessed hearts invoking what we now know as love for our brethren . I held you in the sphere of my understanding as the lover I'd never meet but always carry in the most cherished of my thoughts. When Zeus handed me his quill and inkwell I knew I would only use his gift for my inspired notes to you. Though I was not blessed a poets words like Robert Browning he who took Elizabeth Barrett into his heart from the first time he read her so I did with you. Only laid blood on parchment to declare the love you inspired in me. Like a schoolboy's first kiss was the day my eyes embraced the body of your work. Before the first pine broke the ground, the first lark sang, the first orchards rare enchanted the rainforests. Before the first chameleon blended into the multicoloured break of dawn. Before infinite rows of wheat invitingly waved from the fields to greet Hera. Before liquid rose to separate into creeks, swamps, rivers, lakes with fish of all kinds wasn't it me who rode the first seahorse just to make you smile. Anything, all... possible with the swirl of a letter the turn of a word. I found an immense love tracking the shores of your fine poetry always a chill that ran up my back. No one. No one! Only you. Your fine talent, gifted, honed perfected...flaws and all... moulds sculpts, breathes life into ordinary words, creates poetry owns me. September 26 2016 MY

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Date: 4/8/2017 3:05:00 PM
Good Afternoon Maurice. It was the title that led me to turn the page. Your words are magnificent. Poetry and words can truly reach a soul and spark emotion. I so agree. Be proud of this entry work and expression. Well done entirely. It was an honor to read this entry.
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Date: 11/2/2016 5:26:00 PM
Such a beauty this is..Such a fantastic poem...indeed...A fave
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Date: 10/26/2016 11:09:00 AM
She is some kind of poet to elicit such profound praise. " I knew you before heavenly purity grew wings." Just an example of many fine lines, Maurice. I can relate to such outpouring. And there is more to it than just words. Love, daver
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Date: 10/23/2016 10:27:00 PM
Amazing write, Armand. I love the the way you affirm your admiration for the poetess you write of. Thanks for your visits to my work.
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Date: 10/7/2016 6:13:00 AM
Like the sun, you rise above others. You are a beast when it comes to writing. I love your pen... can I please borrow your lightingballpoint pen.... Please... Linda
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Date: 9/30/2016 3:35:00 PM
Beautiful....what a way to be seduced! Full marks to you, Armand! #7+ Regards // paul
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Date: 9/27/2016 3:21:00 PM
A fantastic poem, Armand. So glad to see a new one of yours up here today. I am with Jan. I would love to see you riding that sea horse. Sorry you had to read that restaurant poem. I did the whole thing wrong! But I am not redoing it as a rhyme. I wasted to much time on it already! this incredible poem a FAVE
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Date: 9/27/2016 3:16:00 PM
What an inspirational and romantic write my friend... Hey I saw you on that seahorse Armand - it had 4 legs but 3 dropped off on your journey lol - oh I love that line you wrote such incredible imagery:-) hugs jan xx 7 and faves
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Date: 9/26/2016 6:01:00 PM
So romantic my friend...beautiful
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Date: 9/26/2016 4:48:00 PM
Maurice, I feel the same way about it myself:) Enjoyed your version. Very dramatic poetry!
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Date: 9/26/2016 4:05:00 PM
Your words by far our my favourite :) I love this poem. A definite fav.
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