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The Rose, A Questionku

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The Rose, A Questionku

                                              o                                                 $orrow$ 
                                       o         <> As                                   o<>$orrow$
                                           o   $          the flows                /               $orrow$
                                o           <>                     o              /                $orrow$
                                o       o                             from her /                 $orrow$
                                      o      O                        sorrows                    $orrow$
                          o      o                                     drew                    $orrow$
                         o             o                              the veil                 o<>
                      o   o      o            O                                              o<>o
                    o  o    o  o      o                         from their eyes,   <>o
                   o o  o                o         O                     /             o
                  o o  o           o                                     /
                 o          o                             O          Died
               o  o   o                                             The
               o  o                  o                           Rose
             o  o                                                 /
             o                                                  from
                               o                              their
              o                                              blows
                                                                !
                                                           O  and   o O   Oo  
                   o                                 O         the    o O  O  O
                                                  O              hail      o  Oo  O  
  Pearls are pouring,                   O                     !        o O  OO  
                                             O                      in        o O  OO 
                                             O                     their  o  O  OO
  Like dew on The Rose:              O                 lies    o  O.Oo
  Who's hailing her sorrows?                O        O      O   O

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  1. Date: 2/13/2013 6:17:00 PM
    Hello Irfana just dropped by to say hello. I hope you are well. I haven't heard from you in a while.

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 2/16/2013 8:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Irfana??? Work and family have kept me away for a while and I'm trying to give some more time to poetry today! Wrote a shape Questionku even! Check it out some time! Happy there are true friends who won't forget me!:) Love, Hanitra
  1. Date: 1/10/2013 12:07:00 AM
    very nicely worded,,, nice flow to it, have a great day ;}

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 5:04:00 AM
    this is so profound,, not many can write so intense in such short poetry.. you have indeed a wonderful talent,, long may your pen rule....

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 1:55:00 PM
    Aye, Hanitra.....the weary warrior! jimbo

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 5:46:00 PM
    Very clever play on words and ideas..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 1:09:00 PM
    Hallo Hanitra. Thank you for stopping by my poems and the complements - you have me blushing :-) Complements of the Season to you, my dear. Love The Rose. XXX

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 8:43:00 AM
    Hello Hanitra, it has been a while since we have spoken. What do you celebrate during this time of year? Whatever it is I hope you are truly blessed. Your Canadian friend Rick

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 10:53:00 AM
    me again, I hope this greeting finds you healthy and happy.

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 1/2/2013 7:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sorry, Rick! Not much time to write but I'm reading my friends on the soup as often as possible! Congratulations for all the big challenges you 've been taking since! I'm very proud of our friendship! Big success for Questionku! And now, already stepping forward to Understepping! You're really amazing! And such a big heart as always! Lots of hugs! Hanitra
  1. Date: 11/27/2012 9:37:00 AM
    Hello Hanitra I miss visiting with you. I hope this greeting finds you well.

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 11/28/2012 12:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    So nice of you, I'm very well, Rick! I hope you too! Thank you for stopping by The Rose. You're blessed to have so much inspiration: your poems are so great and these new forms are pretty exciting!
  1. Date: 11/21/2012 7:47:00 PM
    Loving this one once again,,, V R-A,Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 11/25/2012 12:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    So nice of you, dear PD; and you have chosen a great sign for your new profile! Wonderful idea, indeed! Proud to be a Souper Trooper, izn'it!? (^_^) And once more, congratulations for all the visitors to your "Public Enemy - The Haiku" poems! It is a well deserved success! Keep on enlighting our days, dear PD! Love, Hanitra
  1. Date: 11/21/2012 8:55:00 AM
    Talk about a critique, Richard below summed it up completely. Awsome writes from both of you.

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 7:53:00 PM
    Another thought ,, a very deep image and gift you have here... thank you for the kind words in my poem...pd

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 11/18/2012 12:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much!
  1. Date: 11/14/2012 4:11:00 PM
    wonderful write Hanitra...enjoyed

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 11/18/2012 12:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Joseph!
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 7:52:00 AM
    I guess the Rose was to delicate to survive the salty tears that had turned into hail, Because of a heart that was hardened by all those lies. You have created a lot of images for me. Well done Hanitra

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 11/18/2012 12:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Rick!