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the rights of spring

The harmony of the clouds 
In the sky 
Sing the silents of snow 
Half notes and denotes
In the air 
While winds whistles
And whispers its constant dare 
Eyes worship and stare 
At the greateness of the shroud 
Hides us from the moon and stars 
A frozen blanket streached so far 
It equals the size of the sea 
It speaks the tongues of 
Winter to me 
Cold froze and freezing 
Contemptious names 
For the days of decieving spring

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  1. Date: 6/8/2013 10:55:00 AM
    Old man winter and missie spring and I think you know which one I like best. Wonderful poem john. love phyl

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 10:28:00 AM
    I couldn't agree with Sara's comment more- this is excellent! It was a pleasure to stop by and read. Hugs! :)

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 10:32:00 AM
    Great work..An excellent one from you..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 10:12:00 PM
    This fight between old man winter and lady spring is getting ridiculous around here....great poem...

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 8:37:00 AM
    - Spring is desired .... but winter has not quite let go yet ... but I see signs of spring - hooray!! - A very nice poem John. - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)