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The Red Cardinals

Flock of Red Cardinals
Visit bird bath 
Only small amount of water
No rain for weeks
One eats Rudbeckia seeds  

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 11/3/2012 7:42:00 AM

Nice tanka. I just love the red cardinals. I think they are beautiful. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Kash Poet

Date: 11/3/2012 6:50:00 AM

Nicely penned image in this Tanka.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 11/3/2012 6:19:00 AM

Excellent. Painted well. Enjoyed. Tfs

Robert Pettit

Date: 11/2/2012 10:46:00 PM

For a rather short write, it conveys a lot of quality descriptiveness. Good write as usual Sara.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/2/2012 9:04:00 PM

Sara...the Japanese influence of your last line is seldom....well, never....matched here on the soup...dry...matter-of-fact observation...delightful! Yes...we share a passion for birds....would love to go birding with you! Jimbo

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/2/2012 3:24:00 PM

wonderful again, Sara, this ability you have, of sharing, your countryside with us all.. you paint the perfect picture every time, thanks for that...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/2/2012 12:38:00 PM

Based on all the bad weather I guess there is no shortage of water for the bath now. Thanks for descriptive Poem, I may now decide to look a little closer the next time I see a bird.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/2/2012 12:15:00 PM

now ya got me curious......the singular twist last line,,,,,very intriguing....jimbo

Adell Foster

Date: 11/1/2012 5:58:00 PM

Sara this is a beautiful write one can truly appreciate the view, cardinals are very lovely birds. Thank you for sharing the read. Many Blessings, Always, Adell ;-)

Anthony Nutter

Date: 11/1/2012 11:36:00 AM

Loved it, The cardinal is one of my favorite birds. Funny that in nature the male bird is dressed so flamboyantly and the female is rather dull in plummage. The exact opposite for us humans.

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 11/1/2012 9:26:00 AM

you're one of the great poet on PS friend Sara...i like this poem of yours...thanks for sharing. have a blessed day always!! (^_^)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/1/2012 5:24:00 AM

how visual and lovely this is, sara... i go wow!..:) huggs!

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/31/2012 10:03:00 PM

you've painted a lovely picture Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/31/2012 3:04:00 PM

Sara, i love your tanka, stopping by to wish you a Happy Halloween ;-).~hugs xox hugs~ Please have a happy, fun and safe Halloween. Trick or treat~ Love:-) PD

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 10/31/2012 12:39:00 PM

I enjoyed this poem.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/31/2012 11:11:00 AM

A beautiful looking bird and I know my mom puts seed and water out for the birds all year long. There is a number of different birds so nice to sit and watch what comes in to eat. Enjoyed this poem today. Happy Halloween. love phyl