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The Rape of Poetry-W

Wonder how many poetry-gods or language-gods They distort or disfigure the poem to their whims. What are the uses of the Standard Forms of Poetry If each one of us wants to be the creator of rules. One demands there should be no punctuation Other says I am strict about the punctuation. Still other commands less or more syllables I wonder it tests the taste of creative writers Than the rules permit in forms of poetry. At the same time ignores the rule of Capital Breaking the rules of grammar and forms. I wonder if it is to satisfy one’s ego Still I am searching the logic behind this change. Still other not certain of syllable rules Puts a blog to learn the rules of others Instead of giving benefit of doubt And claims that he is very strict about it. A time may come when there will be sonnets Of 1 line to any length and haiku of one syllable. First lesson we learn of the grammar and The forms of poetry are fast overlooked. Tell me if it is not the rape of the poetry. Please my fellow poets-in-pens and quills Don’t mutate the poetry that is our passions Inspirations, emotions, feelings and what not. She is the food of our thoughts and passions Be gentle, tread softly on that lovely road. ===================================== Second Place winner Contest: Your Free Word Precept – In Honor of John Freeman

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Date: 12/14/2010 7:42:00 AM
Dr. Mehta, you are simply amazing. So wonderfully gifted and trained in the art of which you master so well. Yet, so completely open to the various levels of experience, style, and forms of others. This is the true beauty of what we do; and the beauty of you! Thank you kindly for sharing and inspiring so many...especially me! Lay
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Date: 12/14/2010 4:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Dr. Ram. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/13/2010 3:23:00 PM
Hi, Doctor. Personally I'm not one for hard and fast rules. Nor am I one for ostentacious display, unless the poet has deep command of his vocabulary. My desire in writing and reading poetry is to read a work that SAYS something no matter the form or use of words. Congrats on this selection. I admire the way you speak your mind. Love, Dave
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Date: 12/12/2010 4:47:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful one to share with us all my friend with luv..
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Date: 10/30/2010 5:09:00 AM
your concern is really genuine because rally there is no reason one can disfigure the form of poetry
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Date: 10/18/2010 3:46:00 PM
an excellent piece :). you handled your subject well, and it had a good flow to it. some really amazing lines here :). thank you for the comments, hope all is well. --Madison
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Date: 10/14/2010 4:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/6/2010 9:30:00 AM
Beautiful peice of work...and im alright, just caught up in a lot of things. i realllyyy apreciate you reading my poem, i dont get much of that anymore...guess cause i havent had much of a chance to read others...im trying though, just so much going on...anyways, thanks and reallly great job on this peice. ~Jessica
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Date: 10/5/2010 2:58:00 PM
With poetry, the parameters are so flexible it's wonderful. For this gives open scope for us poets and writers. Rules are boundaries to be stretched and created. Excellent write Dr. Ram >> James
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Date: 10/5/2010 2:30:00 PM
Now this was a fantastic read I enjoyed reading it.Thanks for your very kind comment.Teresa
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Date: 9/30/2010 1:11:00 PM
ohh wow what a great poem superb
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Date: 9/29/2010 4:08:00 PM
Poetry,internal expression from inspiration written to provoke .As some professors cannot conjugate a verb, and some,Idiots like me just love to write.In hope the message, moves just one person to act , feel or enjoy.! how ever I respect your view...people should learn as much as they can,about any undertaking.But no poem should be stifled.
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Date: 9/28/2010 1:09:00 PM
Dr Ram, What you discuss is very difficult , I love Debussys music but find Mozart , Bach etc to formalised in fact I hate it, but do Like classical music?. Form in art and music is very clever but art is maybe not about being clever but transmitting a feeling or experience, but I agree you can't write unless you know the alphabet,but true art sometimes never steps softly. - He who stands astride the road will have seven enemies! All the best
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Date: 9/28/2010 12:45:00 PM
Poetry is heart to paper. Can you put a rule or form to that? Then it becomes conformity and a contest.
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Date: 9/28/2010 12:26:00 PM
wondering searching, leading, following, all have their time and place..perhaps all that is truely important is that the verse speaks to someone or for someone? Light & Love
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Date: 9/27/2010 9:18:00 AM
These are words for all of Soup to live by.. Excellent message given here... always Michael
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Date: 9/27/2010 5:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dr.Ram in John Freeman's contest "Your Free Verse Precept" Love,Carol
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Date: 9/26/2010 8:52:00 PM
Many congratulations Dr. mehta. i knew this was a winner.
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Date: 9/26/2010 6:20:00 PM
Tread softly on that lovely road...enjoyed this Dr Ram..many good points here in your free verse. Congratulations to you on this fine meaningful win
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Date: 9/26/2010 2:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest Dr. Ram. All the best, iolanda
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Date: 9/26/2010 2:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your superb win in John's "Free Verse" Contest, Dr. Ram! Love, Audrey
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Date: 9/26/2010 1:15:00 PM
A new favorite
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Date: 9/26/2010 11:34:00 AM
Surely one of the best entries in the contest, Dr. Ram, and a favorite for me since the first time I read it. Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/26/2010 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest Dr. Ram
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Date: 9/26/2010 9:57:00 AM
"Our Concepts will certainly rape Our eternal precept, if we aren't wise Dr Ram." But our wisdom will overcome" "Thinks so much for this precept write, and congratulations on your win" Agape, Moses
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