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The Price of Oil...

Beach as black as me Human error killed my wings Hoping for God's rain...

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2010 8:15:00 PM

I really like yours, Iolanda! Congratulations.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2010 12:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Tainted Feathers" contest Iolanda. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 5/16/2010 6:01:00 AM

Super message in your Haiku Iolanda, if only the rains could repair mans carelessness. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest >> James

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 5/15/2010 3:35:00 PM

Congrats on you 7th place win in the contest, Iolanda! Very nice....Jimmy

John Freeman

Date: 5/14/2010 8:33:00 PM

Congratulations Iolanda on your 7th place win. Agape, Moses

Ray Dillard

Date: 5/14/2010 6:16:00 PM

Nice choice of words! Congrats on your showing! RAY

Rick Parise

Date: 5/14/2010 5:35:00 PM

Very nice!!!Congrats on the win !!!!!~Rick

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/14/2010 1:06:00 PM

Congrats Iolanda on your winning poem in Raul's contest with your amazing words describing the sad and tragic photo of destruction.. enjoy another win my dear friend..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/14/2010 12:11:00 AM

Iolanda, congratulations on your placement in my Tainted Feathers contest...Raul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2010 7:29:00 AM

Gosh, is there a picture contest going on. I am seeing lots of haiku about oil!! Bummer, I'm gonna miss out then. This is really NICE, and thanks for your comment to me on my blog. LUv, andrea