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The price of love

Days back then.
I don't remember when.
I just rung on your door.
You pushed me on the floor.
You stabbed in my back.
Then you dragged me down the track.
Then to be satisfied, you hit me in my face.
And then you hung me up with a lace.
Is this the price I had to pay.
For my love.
Then in an other life you fooled me again.
Then after all your time pass.
You pushed me in front of a train.
But before I die.
Just tell me Why?
What was my mistake?
Why I'm always last in love race.
But you had no mercy.
And you just pushed me.
Is this the price to love you.
Then tell me what is left to do.

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  1. Date: 1/15/2013 7:49:00 AM
    Thank alot everyone !!

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 6:20:00 AM
    It does portray strong emotions and nice write.

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 6:09:00 AM
    My dear friend, your poem a cry for understanding, A scream from agony, when all end? Your poem, is real full of feelings and love. May you find it. Lovely, warm writing. Thank you for sharing!

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 4:15:00 PM
    This is a passionate lyric poem. Lyric is simply the thoughts and feelings of the poet. Good write - JH