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The Powerful Silvery Stardust

On that starry night, as I sat on the open balcony Of my own pigeon home, so cosy I saw, mesmerization, O pure adoration How beautous was this great attraction! A blanket of stardust, a black one full of stars Faced with it, so trivial seemed my scars Life itself seemed so mysterious And so full of grace so imperious! As I watched with wonder, came running down my cheeks Those tears, seeking their way out of their creeks Merciful must be the high Lord None knew why he did create a world so haggard! Somewhere, thought I, must be an abode There, sing the fairies, an eternal ode While switching on and off the blinking lights Of life and death, such must be its sights! On that starry night, living seemed a must A travel from a forgotten place to an unknown one To live simply with the wills of just Shall someday give me the high stature of the great swan!
Name : Anoucheka Gangabissoon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/24/2013 3:02:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/23/2013 3:50:00 PM
Great expressive creative winner..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 1/23/2013 11:02:00 AM
I like your blanket of stardust !! Enjoyed the read and congrats on your win !!
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Date: 1/23/2013 10:49:00 AM
Congratulations on a great win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/23/2013 2:19:00 AM
Congratulations Anoucheka this is a worthy winner luv xx
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Date: 1/22/2013 9:13:00 PM
A G. Congratulations in Gail's "Blanket of Stardust" contest. :-). Have yourself a goodnight~LINDA
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Date: 1/5/2013 4:50:00 AM
i like it. Makes me think and imagine
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 1/5/2013 10:05:00 AM
:) Thkie !! XOXOXO

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