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The Path of Life

In the travels of my life; Through many towns and cities I went. A lot of people I met in the path of my life. Some people left good memories. Others just left pain. In that world - I learned a lot of things, I learned to smoke and drink. I also learned other bad things that maybe I shouldn't have, but they are gone now and of that I'm glad. Some people gave me joy, others made me cry, yet there was one that broke my heart and made it bleed. The bleeding stopped one day, when someone came to my life and took the pain away. At the end of my journey, very tired I returned, to you my JESUS - I kneel at your feet. Your forgiveness I ask for all the sins and mistakes that I did. Today here on my knees, I ask you to clean my soul. Please take away my sins and bury them in the bottom of the sea. Show me now a new path where I can walk with you and be free...
01/05/2013 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:05:00 PM
    Sometimes an about turn shows a new path and though it may not be easy, the new way gets us out of the rut we were in. Uplifting verse Lucy, to encourage others!

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 10:15:00 PM
    Hello Lucy, thank you for the soup mail... about your poem. love the feeling and pleading in your poem... I pray my new path this year sets me right with God, and one day I wish to be one of them people you visit through your traveling life... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 9:24:00 PM
    A wonderful testimony in a poem !! Enjoyed each verse !! Blessings !!

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 1:16:00 PM
    A magnificent devotional poem. I am deeply touched. Thanks Lucilla for your profound appreciation of my poem Welcome 2013. You have made my day. Love -Mohammad

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 9:25:00 AM
    This is life and nothing else. Lovely penned. Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 10:58:00 AM
    Lucilla, an uplifting poem~ LUV~ SKAT

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 10:28:00 AM
    alovely piece of work here love. xx

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 6:22:00 AM
    Dear Lucilla, what a lovely ending, Seeking Refuge where we all should have done from the beginning. HE though is eternal and eternal HIS love. Life on the other hand is like the sea: Either calm or turbulent has got the same depth. Thank you for the message you pass. Wonderfully inspired poem!

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 5:11:00 PM
    We've shared a thought today Lucilla ..... Same title on our poems. - Yet completely different poems, I like yours very well. - Have a great weekend my dear friend. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 5:11:00 PM
    Lucilla, I enjoyed reading this bio type poem of yours. It is a very sincere heartfelt poem and shows your great faith. So you have a figuring like that one I described? Boy, they have LOTS Of precious moments figurines out there, don't they?

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 3:30:00 PM
    Nothing good comes easy and you certainly are a good woman. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 2:42:00 PM
    this is a wonderful poem,, Lucilla, love your faith, need to edit your first line 2 t's together,,,

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 12:25:00 PM
    A true testament of your faith, Lucilla..Love your poem...May God grant you all your good wishes, my friend. Love, Annalise