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The Partition

a silken wall

beyond earthly realms

separates us all

from the great mystery

no mortal can see

lest He should call



Written 9/24/13 by Andrea Dietrich
for nette onclaud's POEM OF COMPRESSION Poetry Contes

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Phyllis Babcock Date: 10/29/2013 10:41:00 PM nice one. love phyl Login to Reply

Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 10/23/2013 10:31:00 PM Wonderful poem you have written here. Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/13/2013 7:54:00 AM Well done, I had expected to see this one on the list Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/10/2013 8:26:00 PM Andrea, ... Congratulations on your awesome win in Nette's contest... always~ LINDA Login to Reply

Monterey Sirak Date: 10/10/2013 9:25:00 AM Beautiful. I don't know what else to say. Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 10/9/2013 10:25:00 AM Love your thought-provoking words...inspiring and beautiful! Congrats on your win! Love and blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 10/8/2013 8:20:00 PM sweet win Andrea...............SKAT Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/7/2013 12:00:00 PM Congrats on your excellent winning work..Enjoyed the touch of spiritual influence in the lines..Sara Login to Reply

Cecilia Macfarlane Date: 10/6/2013 3:19:00 PM Awesome write and win Andrea! Hugs Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 10/6/2013 12:29:00 PM Wonderful and lovely write,great friend.CONGRATULATIONS!! Login to Reply

Sandra Adams Date: 10/5/2013 6:37:00 PM congrats on your great win :) Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 10/5/2013 5:38:00 PM Great poem and win Congratulations. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 10/5/2013 10:23:00 AM A more spiritual route you took with this one! Well done, Andrea.....nice to share the spot with one who excels at each verse she writes!! :) Congratulations! Login to Reply

Bukang Liwayway Date: 10/5/2013 9:45:00 AM Congratulations on your win friend Andrea. It's awesome! Have a nice weekend ;) hugs, Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 10/5/2013 9:15:00 AM Congrats on your win Andrea!Loved it. Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 10/5/2013 7:59:00 AM beautifully written Andrea....congrats on your win Login to Reply

Richard D Seal Date: 10/4/2013 10:29:00 PM Sagacious. Inspired title. Thought provoking idea of what separates us. Take care, Richard Login to Reply

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 10/3/2013 5:22:00 PM Goose bumps... I can see the Glory roll and I find the title absolutely magic; music, fate, planned choregraphy, anything that suggests secret majesty and the greatest power of all... Goose bumps and hope! Thanks for sharing, Andrea and a winner for sure as always! How can you stay so creative all the time!!!? Love, Hanitra Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 9/30/2013 7:56:00 AM One word Andrea, Awesome! Absolutely love this write of yours. Definitely gonna see this on the winner's list.. I am doing good thanks, just had a hectic weekend.. How are things on your side? Login to Reply

Robert Johnson Date: 9/26/2013 10:25:00 AM Such a dagger of faith in this one. Love to bleed like this. :) Peace. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/26/2013 8:16:00 AM We are on similar wave lengths but you are less verbose. Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 9/26/2013 3:46:00 AM This beauty makes me reflect about my faith dear.Is He so far?Is He so close..How is it there?Who am I here?.An introspective thought which makes me ponder.So inspiring. Login to Reply

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 9/25/2013 9:46:00 PM This is short, but good for the contest. Good night.... Lucilla Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 9/25/2013 7:47:00 PM You have written a beautiful write my friend! Your expression is tremendous, a lovely poem! Great Work!! Login to Reply

Sandra Adams Date: 9/25/2013 7:45:00 PM wow...you penned a great poem....love it, am sure it will do well in the contest :) Login to Reply

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