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The Paper Doll-Septolet

Floating as kites, it rises above, the paper doll wanders through the endless night. Entered in nette onclaud's contest, " Septolet The Puppet " written by Andrew Crisci on 9/23/ 2012

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Date: 9/23/2012 10:21:00 PM
Nice write for Nette's contest. Seems you have the same issue I had. Just wondering, where the flavour is? I wrote one and had to change it, to add flavour and fabric. You have the paper as fabric, but its a challenge to get the two items in such a short poem. Great poem as it stands. Lee
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