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The Palette

The tentative steps you take is that of a baby learning to walk you feel your way around bumping into things half swearing, when you bump into a chair you can’t remember that chair being in that particular place the sounds you hear paint a vivid picture in your head but since that day everything is shrouded in black you call to mind those pink roses and the purple petals you use to smell, it brings a smile to your face you still dream in color even though your sight has been taken away you paint your day in every color that’s on offer on your palette you draw your strength from the fact that you are still alive and the fact that others were not so lucky…

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Date: 7/1/2010 10:09:00 PM
Wilma, who is this person you describe? you do it so well. YOu know what, I gotta fav you. YOu are just an awesome poet. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/1/2010 11:17:00 AM
what a very different way of approaching blindness, Wilma--wasn't sure what to expect when I first read your title--this is really good and it shows the reader to be thankful for the sight that they still have :) just a typo in your 3rd line for "your"--hope this helps & eek what am I still doing here?? going now going now...zzzzzz --nikko :)
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Date: 7/1/2010 5:11:00 AM
touching poem, describes being blind nicely
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Date: 7/1/2010 5:11:00 AM
touching poem, describes being blind nicely
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Date: 6/30/2010 1:53:00 PM
A very upbeat perspective makes this compelling poem quite special, Wilma. People who go through life without their sight can only rely on sounds, smells and other senses. However, the person you describe has an admirable, positive view of life. God bless you for sharing this moving poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/30/2010 6:54:00 AM
excellent write. loved the positive attitude. look forward to the time when the blind will recover their sight (Isaiah 35:5)
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