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The Obeah Woman

The Obeah Woman
Heavy musty air reeks with the Obeah Woman’s pungent perfume, sweat, burnt incense, bitter roots, and swirling black smoke, dim light from a waning moon streams into the shadowy room; and mirrors crack as restless spirits appear that she has evoked.
Thick, tall beeswax candles darkest black and blood red, dried aromatic herbs, pincushion effigies, and chicken feet, glistening gold crosses and machetes hang from rafters overhead, as she fervently chants mystical spells to complete.
Swinging Chango’s double-headed axe, she dances by her hearth, with a bottle of Barcadí Rum and expensive Cuban cigars that she smokes, unearthly voice passionately invoking the Orisha’s vengeful wrath, she gyrates hypnotically as the crackling red-hot embers she pokes.
A force to reckon with, she is reviled and made an outcast by some, as many fear the mesmerizing icy stare of the Obeah Woman, believing she is possessed by dark spirits and belongs in an asylum; she is damned for her mystifying gifts that are truly uncommon.
But her magical arts are sought after by all even the bigots, rich as well as poor visit her hut in secret, braving the dead of night and taking risky shortcuts, paying for her services with food, money, and gold trinkets.
Many rely on her uncanny supernatural skills, to predict the future with her divine gift of divination, using her potent potions to heal their ailments and other ills; or warding off demons with her spiritual charms and incantations.
Her powerful amulets and herbal brews are always in demand, with clients pleading for protection from every evil, the Obeah Woman’s forceful spells keep their fates in her hand, as she decides who to reward, or who to haunt with a devil.
The High Priestess of Obeah can bestow either happiness or grief, richly rewarding the faithful or punishing an offender with dire misery and pain; but whatever may be one's considered belief, curses or blessings - her mysterious powers are difficult to explain.
08-13-2014 Contest: Screwed IX Sponsor: John Hamilton Placement: 5th Note: Obeah is used in the Caribbean to refer to folk magic, sorcery, and religious practices similar to Palo, Vodou, Santería, rootwork, and hoodoo. In the Yuruba religion, Chango is the Orisha of fire, lightening, thunder, and war.

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Date: 12/25/2015 3:27:00 PM
You described her very well, Pandita. BIG congrats in the contest of Rob!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/26/2015 11:30:00 PM
Thank you, dear Andie, for visiting and leaving your very insightful comments! I am happy you enjoyed this piece! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 12/25/2015 3:23:00 PM
PANDITA, Congratulations on your wonderful win. *** Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! SKAT
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/26/2015 11:33:00 PM
I thank you kindly, Skat, for all your wonderful support throughout the year that has meant a lot to me. Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 12/24/2015 8:49:00 AM
What a clever write Pandita. What an imagination you have. Congratulations on your win!!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/24/2015 9:40:00 PM
Thank you kindly, dear Michael! I am very happy you like this piece. I hope you are enjoying this wonderful season! Pandita
Date: 8/15/2015 12:46:00 PM
Hi Pandita...I thoroughly enjoyed this walk into the spiritual realm...its a bit on the dark side, but I can honestly say it rings true...most people believe in the potency of traditional medicines and the power of the ancesters...thank you for visiting my poem & have a gr8 wknd further *******(:heers, Tbang
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Date: 8/15/2015 6:32:00 PM
Thank you, Thabang, for visiting and leaving your very insightful comments! I am happy you enjoyed the read! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 11/7/2014 5:43:00 PM
Ashe My Talented Sister! The Healing Ancestors are surely with you! Your writing magic with such creative precision.. A winner of the highest accolades here! Ashe Pandita!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/8/2014 8:03:00 AM
Ashe, dear Marie, your thoughtful complimentary response thrills me to no end! Thank you, thank you, my friend, for thinking so highly of my work! I am very happy that you appreciate this particular piece in the way you expressed it. Have a wonderful day! Pandita
Date: 8/29/2014 8:09:00 PM
Hello Pandita . . . Congratulations on your win in the contest!! The imagery of your poem is superbly done. This is a great read. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Best Wishes, and again -- congratulations. Cheers, Gary
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Date: 8/29/2014 9:00:00 PM
Gary, I thank you kindly for your wonderful comments and for complimenting my work. I am very happy that you enjoyed it! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 8/29/2014 8:05:00 PM
Outstanding write! I am from that region and I am very familiar with Obeah so it was easy for me to understand the excellent job you have done with this wonderful piece. You deserve a better placement in the contest, but you should be proud of this wonderful write. All the best, Kika
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Date: 8/29/2014 8:59:00 PM
Kika, thank you very much for visiting and for your great compliment! I know that those who are familiar with Obeah will definitely understand and appreciate this piece. Pandita
Date: 8/29/2014 10:06:00 AM
Hi Pandita, once again, thanks for the reply.. nice of you :L
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Date: 8/28/2014 11:47:00 PM
Loved reading it Pandita, congrats.....Seren
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Date: 8/28/2014 10:51:00 PM
Congratulations Pandita... I will give you a star... Beautifully penned... Verlena
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Date: 8/29/2014 9:52:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Poetry Diva, for your wonderful, superlative support and compliments. Pandita
Date: 8/28/2014 1:57:00 PM
Well done, dear Pandita! Congratulations! Kika
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Date: 8/28/2014 2:12:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Kika, for your wonderful support and comments. Pandita
Date: 8/28/2014 10:47:00 AM
Congratulations, Pandita
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Date: 8/28/2014 12:28:00 PM
Thanks very much, SKAT A! Pandita
Date: 8/28/2014 9:40:00 AM
nice win Pandita...LINDA
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Date: 8/28/2014 12:27:00 PM
Many thanks, Linda! Pandita
Date: 8/28/2014 9:37:00 AM
Pandita, in my book, this is Number One. A very descriptive and thorough exposition of the Obeah Woman in the Caribbean. Many of the folks at the Soup may not be familiar with this. Haiti is still considered to be a place where voodoo or black magic is practised. I suspect you have Caribbean connections to be able to produce a piece like this. Great Job!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/28/2014 12:44:00 PM
Hi John, thank you - thank you, for thinking so highly of my work. You are absolutely right that most people may not be familiar with this type of witchcraft and hence would not understand the context and practices. And you are also right about me as I do originate from Latin America and the Caribbean and have first hand knowledge of the traditions and practices that inspired this piece. I am very happy that you were able to appreciate it the way you did. Thank you again, my friend! Pandita
Date: 8/28/2014 9:36:00 AM
Wow is right! I would have placed this at the top of the list......such excellence should be higher! Well done, Pandita!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/28/2014 12:34:00 PM
Hi Carrie, many thanks for endorsing and complimenting my work on such a high level. This really means a lot to me and I find your words very supportive, encouraging, and inspiring! Pandita
Date: 8/28/2014 9:01:00 AM
Wow Pandita this is tremendous n superb my dear friend! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/28/2014 12:31:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Dr. Upma, I truly appreciate your kind compliments and support! Pandita
Date: 8/28/2014 8:14:00 AM
Well done Pandita, I enjoyed reading this one again.
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Date: 8/28/2014 12:30:00 PM
I thank you kindly, Richard, for your wonderful compliments and continued support. Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 8/28/2014 1:33:00 AM
Really interesting write Pandita thanks for the notes at the end:-) many congratulations. Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 8/28/2014 7:05:00 AM
Thank you, Jan. I appreciate your kind comments. Pandita
Date: 8/20/2014 6:32:00 PM
WOW! Pandita this is a very interesting poem. Some people say - I don't believe in witch Craft, But I do. I have see so many things done to people. I would never pay someone to hurt anyone. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/21/2014 7:42:00 AM
Hi Lucilla, I have seen many unexplainable supernatural occurences that have made me a believer or at least made me wonder. I am very glad you appreciate this piece. Thank you, my friend! Warm hugs, Pandita.
Date: 8/20/2014 9:19:00 AM
This was an exceptional piece of poetry; one of my favorites. You captured the Obeah woman, quite well.
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Date: 8/20/2014 10:11:00 AM
I thank you kindly for your wonderful compliments and continued support, my friend. Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 8/18/2014 8:45:00 AM
Is this for Freddie's contest? If so I think it will do very well.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/18/2014 12:47:00 PM
I entered it in Freddie's contest and I thank you, Richard, for taking the time to look at it. This type of witchcraft is still quite popular in many parts of the Caribbean. And since most of it is from memory, I hope that this piece does some justice to the Obeah Woman's mystique. Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 8/16/2014 5:17:00 PM
oh, loved this - interesting write indeed, my friend
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/17/2014 8:10:00 PM
I thank you kindly, Jack for your compliments and comments, my friend. It is always good to hear from you! Warmest regards. Pandita

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