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The Mystery Rose, a Love Gift From Beyond

The Mystery Rose, A Love Gift From Beyond A dark, dark shadow crept into my room at night a mist or vapor that so set me ill at ease Strange that my confusion so limited my fright then it moved things around as it pleased Soon began eerie sounds that loudly cracked next my bows fell from their hanging rack Suspended in hazy fog or time it did so seem motionless and quite unable to shout a scream As I finally jumped out of my now shaking bed I tripped and fell hitting my frightened head Early morn I woke, to my great and epic shock a wilted flower lay upon my antique clock A long and so very dry ancient red, red rose yet a fragrance still so strong hit my nose! A mere dream that had been my horror to have had! except red rose was always favored by my dad Three decades gone since he had sadly passed away I know that red rose was his love gift sent my way! Robert L... 06-07-2014

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Date: 6/10/2014 1:58:00 PM
I love this piece. You are a wonderful writer.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/10/2014 6:52:00 PM
Thank you so much for commenting!!
Date: 6/7/2014 3:41:00 PM
i was totally drawn to this piece from the strat.. a powerful, well done work,robert.. huggs
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Date: 6/7/2014 4:26:00 PM
Thanks nette.. A dream can also be real. I dreamed of my wife now and after 4 long years we met...in Cebu.
Date: 6/7/2014 1:35:00 PM
Such beauty surely can not be overwritten my friend. All that is needed is to write about it in new ways. Which is a hard thing to do since a billion poems have been written about the rose! Thanks much for your comment!!!
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Date: 6/7/2014 12:46:00 PM
Wow this is awesome, I personally think that the rose is over written lol but you've put a great spin on this, Bravo...love Jayne x
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/7/2014 1:36:00 PM
Such beauty surely can not be overwritten my friend. All that is needed is to write about it in new ways. Which is a hard thing to do since a billion poems have been written about the rose! Thanks much for your comment!!!

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