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The Music of Ice-Bergs

ellipses tremble trace in waters a deeper kiss than this though deeper still revelling in waves sunken, slips heavy under starry-starry lights i feel tall those empty hollow places that leave me under your skin all deeper to the sound of standing-still deep ocher core

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/20/2010 1:32:00 PM
I enjoyed that thanks
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Date: 12/28/2009 10:59:00 AM
So many things here. I found myself wandering from Freud to VanGough and ending up in the Book of Genesis. Such simple words hiding such emotional mysteries; enjoyed the id. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 12/26/2009 6:56:00 PM
Jerry~ Beautiful Write! Laura :)
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