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The Moments That You Self Doubt Can Kill Your Being .....

The moments that you self doubt can kill your being A shadow of confusion can settle inside Like a devil hiding A flame that surrounds your sense Flesh becomes weak flesh becomes tense The moments that you self doubt can kill your being The clock ticks timing is everything You want to cry the deepest of cuts Your tears can not fall weakness is not appealing Drums in your head the pounding wont subside The moments that you self doubt can kill your being A sadness drives your day Cracks appear from the smoothest of smooth No control is what concerns Still a smile shown till dawn You feel like you want to crawl The moments that you self doubt can kill your being But the floor does not adore such things He is your king but the queen is not sure Who shall wear her crown Who's feelings are stood upon The moments that you self doubt can kill your being The one who breaks the harmonious spell Or the one that wipes the tears and hides all fears The moments that you self doubt can kill your being Without the king even seeing You are dying in your being ....

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Date: 8/12/2010 1:30:00 AM
Hold your head high as much as possible and the self doubt will be caught on the breeze of life and dicipate on stoney ground. And out walks the you >> James
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Date: 8/8/2010 1:44:00 PM
Self doubts can really eat away at us and destroy all that is good in our lives. Wise analysis in your poem, Sarah! Love, Carolyn
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