The Mirror

She was beautiful just a simple girl
Skin young and sleek not a wrinkle to be seen
Breasts that any man would want to be lost in
Sleek long pretty shiny hair, haunting smile
Unaware of her youth and her beauty
Unaware of the deep envy in my beating heart
Does she love with every passion in her soul
Does she feel so deeply, does she understand love.
Does she know what it is to truly care
To fly to the stars, to feel ecstasy in a single touch
To feel everything within, passion roaring
Like a volcano about to erupt and explode
She does not have to look in the mirror and see reality
Her reality is the bursting to life of a brand new bud
No yet experienced or tainted by doubt or fear
A glorious rose ripe for the picking
I do not want to be her, I want to be me
Once I was this girl, but I did not know life
I have experienced life and tasted its honey
I have know, happiness, loneliness, pain and despair
Suddenly within the heart I am young again
See past the years; see all that this heart offers
Unfortunately, not this young beautiful fresh bud in bloom
But this mature child woman, longing for your touch and your love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 6/27/2012 8:37:00 PM
Well Lizzie, you may not see it but you are her and so much more. You wear the years well as I know the child that lives in you and I've experienced the emotions that allow you to love and feel life as we all should. Yes, you are very special!
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Date: 6/7/2012 6:06:00 AM
Imagery divine, dear Lizzie...I have missed u and tho't you moved to another continent...Love the analogies in this poem, especially the ones pertaining to a rose. I will be back for more! Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 6/6/2012 2:04:00 AM
Hi Lizzie. - A lovely poem...hope you can see me in the mirror to my friend.:) - Have a beautiful day in love and sunshine! - always your friend Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/5/2012 6:36:00 AM
great write Lizzie,loved it
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Date: 6/4/2012 9:16:00 PM
time moves in subtle leaps an bounds, an older still is this old hound, i write the tripe that comes to me, from some smartass surreptously, not necessarily me, but i am the channel medium, found, who writes it down, 4 thee.... thank you Lizzie Treetop "mirror poem" Don
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Date: 6/4/2012 7:55:00 PM
VERY beautiful. It's like you understand this woman <3
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Date: 6/4/2012 6:38:00 AM
FOREVER YOUNG IF I MAY SAY...BEAUTIFULL
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