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The Majestic Family

As if hugging the sky The father hill stands, The child beneath his knee The mother to her side, Looks down with pride - A wonderful sight to see! The child lifts up her arms, And carries the ball so bright Then brings it slowly down When it’s time to say Goodnight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/9/2014 3:57:00 PM
what a cool picture for showing the family of mountains . Very creative!
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Date: 7/8/2014 11:32:00 PM
Sneha,, the hills are alive with poetry, that's how it goes. Congratulations, on your awesome win. Love Linda
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Date: 7/8/2014 1:12:00 AM
Wow it's great ! Sun the ball ,, wonderful imagery Sneha! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 7/7/2014 7:48:00 PM
I really enjoyed your second stanza, the way your smallest hill brings up the sun and then puts it to bed. Lovely work, thanks for showing it to me.
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Date: 7/7/2014 3:25:00 PM
Beautiful!!!. Congrats on a great win!.. Hugs .. Arlene
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Date: 7/7/2014 11:12:00 AM
Lovely. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/7/2014 9:09:00 AM
I have seen that ball being softly placed upon a cloud pillow as darkness falls. Wonderful sunset. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 6/27/2014 9:17:00 PM
Nicely written Sneha. World Literature for sure... Verlena
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Date: 6/18/2014 6:47:00 AM
This is so hopeful and bright ! Makes for a good read in the morning when first awakening. Thanks for a beautiful day, Sneha. Love and Light--Keith
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