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The Luxury Cruise

The Luxury Cruise By Elton Camp A long ocean cruise I decided to book Travel funds for several years it took But it was money very well spent And I am extremely glad that I went The cruise ship was a positive delight Never had I seen such a fine sight The outside was painted all in white The cabin was comfortable and bright The captain went out of his way So good things we would have to say The power they occasionally shut down So we could enjoy slowly drifting around From the kitchen came fire and smoke They took us out so we wouldn’t choke The cool ocean breeze on our face Then it was back to the dining place The stateroom toilets are kept so clean Water overflowing you should have seen Any accumulated waste was swept away Great concern for hygiene, I must say Once the ship was parked on the ocean floor So there was so much motion as before For any who tended to get seasick, That consideration did the trick Then came an exciting end to our cruise Trip monotony not a person could accuse Lifeboats we were then allowed to ride Without even waiting for rising tide

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Date: 7/13/2013 2:37:00 PM
Enjoyed this Elton..I've never been on a cruise but my sister has and she said it was grand!
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