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The Lost One

Shivers my heart, by the sound of thunder,
In the world of darkness, alone the soul wander,
The twilight that has no string of light,
Seems its brightness is eaten by night,
Frightened, every particle, every life and the nature,
I find the world no longer has a  nomenclature,
All my directions lost, ways surrounded only by monsters and ghost,
Sails my ship in the deepest sea, with no sign of the coast,
The storm of life which is obstructing my route,
Rain! my only partner which makes me sooth,
When no one recognized drops of water from my eyes, 
You were the one who showed me where another world lies,
You changed my route, my life and brought back the hope of light,
Without you i would have never seen the sun so bright.                              
Waiting for my wrecked, sunk voyage to come ashore in the sun,
Sweet heart! move on, because I am now forever the lost one....

                                                                        -'Panchi' Panchal Hitesh D.

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  1. Date: 1/7/2014 1:48:00 PM
    - Touching and sad ...... but you let go with a good heart. - Beautifully written, Hitesh ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Panchal Avatar Hitesh Panchal
    Date: 1/8/2014 11:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks anne !!
  1. Date: 1/7/2014 1:11:00 PM
    Hitesh, sad as if you are letting go asking the other heart to move on... Why make such a hurtful decision? I love the lonely feeling of this ship sailing alone... maybe it is for the best.. SKAT

    Panchal Avatar Hitesh Panchal
    Date: 1/7/2014 1:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hey Skat, if we again read the second last line, we understand that the sweet heart is waiting in delusion that I shall come whereas i have already left the world since the ship wrecked and sunk