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The Lofty Lighthouse - Sentinel

Terrifying tumultuous tremendous traumatic transaction Horror in the towering splashes of ocean in howl The vigilant lighthouse pounded by the surfs of annihilation The huge and awful sea right now is on the untamed prowl The shivering cold wind around the angry eyes of the hurricane Has ruthlessly dispersed the deep waters in the ocean Even dignity of the lighthouse is hit by the water insane Before the surging rage of the waters in commotion Do you listen to the roaring sea and crushing waves pounding the shores Nothing else is visible nothing else is audible Still don’t lose heart and look at the glistening hopes of the trusted doors There the lofty lighthouse looks almost imperishable This way nature heaves suddenly a deep sigh of suppressed grief In these mad and angry growl of wild wind acts out nature By ventilating its pent up anger it earns catharsis From dark to light is the nature’s optimistic feature _____________________________________________________________________ April 10, 2016 For the Poetry Contest : Sentinel Quatrain Form Hosted by : Eve Roper

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Date: 12/11/2016 12:36:00 PM
I really like this one, Probir. So easy to imagine. Carole
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/11/2016 8:46:00 PM
Thank you, Carole ...
Date: 4/26/2016 1:00:00 AM
Probir, enjoyed the win. Linda
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Date: 4/26/2016 8:05:00 PM
Thank you LINDA....Love...Probir
Date: 4/15/2016 7:28:00 PM
Much to learn frm you.....wonderful alliteration and play of words....congrats
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/15/2016 7:46:00 PM
Thank you Rizwana...
Date: 4/10/2016 6:53:00 AM
This is so so amazing!! The alliteration is wonderful too.. All the best in the contest!! :) :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/10/2016 7:00:00 AM
Thank you Sneha. I am very glad that you like the poem...
Date: 4/10/2016 5:04:00 AM
such vivid description and great alliteration Probir - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/10/2016 5:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Jan for reading and encouraging. Love...Probir

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