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The Littlest Elf

Time was running out, Christmas Eve was drawing nigh!
The elves had worked day and night since early in July!
To meet Santa's toy-making schedule, there must be no slack,
To ensure there were plenty of goodies for Santa's toy sack!

Elfie was a mischievous but a hard-working little sprite.
He was the littlest elf of all, alas, this added to his plight!
It seemed that the harder he worked and try as he might,
The hapless little fellow just couldn't do anything right!

For instance, he put Jills in boxes meant for Jacks-In-The-Box,
And placed chirping chickadees in all the fancy cuckoo clocks!
As he daydreamed he painted the fire trucks aquamarine,
And put wheels and wings on every toy submarine!

Talking dollies counted cadence, "Hup, two, three, four!"
Toy soldiers cried, "I want my mama!" as they marched to war!
He placed Lincoln Logs in boxes labled Tinker Toys.
Oh!  What a Christmas 'twould be for little girls and boys!

Santa mused, "It seems that every job I put him on he mars,
So I'll put him to work pulling levers making Christmas Stars!"
He did so well that Santa asked, "Won't you come along with me,
And place a brilliant Star atop every child's Christmas Tree?"

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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  1. Date: 12/6/2014 10:47:00 PM
    What always thrills me in your Poems is the rhyme, you have so perfected it that there is nothing you can not do with it , a good story here with jewel of rhyme on it; congrats Robert and have a wonderful Weekend...huggs

  1. Date: 12/6/2014 9:12:00 PM
    Wonderful story Robert. I love it. Congratulations on your first place win.

  1. Date: 12/6/2014 4:43:00 PM
    I love this beautiful little story told through poetry. A Fav for me. Congratulations on your first place win.

  1. Date: 12/6/2014 2:16:00 PM
    Looks like he found his calling! Well done! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 12/6/2014 8:23:00 AM
    Enjoyed a great tale from the master, congrats on the win

  1. Date: 12/6/2014 8:04:00 AM
    Wow, I just love it Robert. Truly one of the very best tales! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 12/5/2014 9:19:00 PM
    Go Bob! How cute, sweet, original & funny! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/5/2014 6:03:00 PM
    He just needed to find his place. A great story and win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 12/5/2014 4:56:00 PM
    congratulations on your fine #1 win

  1. Date: 12/5/2014 3:38:00 PM
    This would make a lovely story book - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 11:32:00 PM
    Oh I love this Robert since I am scotch/Irish & Norwegian ;} it's going in my favorites ;},,, have a blessed day Bob;}

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 4:21:00 PM
    Robert what a great imagination you have ,creative and funny too. The line , 'Toy soldiers cried 'I want my mama'. Made me smile . Your Blackberry poem had me looking for the one I wrote about my Grandma. It's called A Great Lady. Merry Christmas to you and yours. hugs Anne

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 11:43:00 AM
    YAAAHHH! Way to go Santa... Very enjoyable read... And perfect for the season!

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 8:09:00 AM
    love this, Bob. Hope you're both well and having a great weekend : )

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 4:37:00 AM
    Hi Robert absoulutely wonderful as usual brilliant my friend made me smile, thanks for that, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 7:42:00 PM
    This is a cute story and hope you have grand kids to read it too. love phyl

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 3:34:00 PM
    Chief!! What a fun and clever write this is---but no surprise coming from you--Merry Christmas Sgt! Just watched White Christmas last night for the 100th time---sappy and silly but IT"S CHRISTMAS!!!!!!

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 7:43:00 AM
    So sweet. So littlest Elf has a new job. Yeyy. Enjoyed, Bob. Love ya. Have a fun weekend :)

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 11:06:00 PM
    this is very cute. Could be a children's story book! You like questionku? you should do a bunch of them, Robert.

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 10:53:00 PM
    Hi Bob, This is such a great poem, love the little elves. Thank you also for reading my writes, appreciate that. I was in USAF from '65 to '69, Andrews and Hickam, made it to Ssgt. Like you, would do it again if I could. Rollo