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The Light

Late that night just inside my front door in the blackness of the dark I hear heavy breathing in the room next door and feel terror in my heart I hesitate while worrying what is it that I will see Will I see a stranger in my home or someone known to me I reach for it-the light switch, the bulbs flicker a bit and then burst I hear them shatter across the room and then I hear him curse I fumble through the doorway in the dark to a table lamp that is near Take a deep breath and shed some light and I see him sitting there Propped up on the couch, glass pieces in his chest Blood trickling down his body, it hit him where he rests Gasping for air he glares at me dying in my sight I give a little wink to him as I turn out the light. I wouldn’t have to kill him in my dream called the light If he would just come clean and do what he knows is right. (The truth and the light will set you free)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/11/2014 10:59:00 PM
Loved this poem! Well done!
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Date: 9/8/2014 8:46:00 PM
bone chilling but very well written. I like it. It is always more difficult to write the dark. Poe did it successfully. You did great, thank you.
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Christine Costello
Date: 9/8/2014 9:10:00 PM
Maurice-check out "the carriaige ride" by pendleton arkwright under new poems-I loved it. :-)
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Christine Costello
Date: 9/8/2014 9:03:00 PM
Thanks Maurice-I quite like the dark ones best. "-)
Date: 9/7/2014 12:31:00 PM
this has such an interesting twist. VERY imaginative. I quite like this one!
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Christine Costello
Date: 9/8/2014 9:04:00 PM
Thank you Andrea- Im so glad you enjoyed. :-)
Date: 9/7/2014 6:45:00 AM
I was not expecting that ending! A great read my friend. Emotions raw and venting.. Bravo!!!
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Christine Costello
Date: 9/7/2014 10:20:00 AM
Robert- thank you for your kind comments. :-)Christine
Date: 9/6/2014 4:24:00 PM
WOW! The emotions in those last two lines are very real and raw, Christine! What a take on the truth and light will set you free. Riveting. Hugs
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Christine Costello
Date: 9/6/2014 4:53:00 PM
Thanks Eileen I appreciate your comments. :-)Chrisitne

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