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The Legend of the Three Sisters Mystery

When the vast sky is its bluest and crowned by the glory of sun, three granite forms tower above the forest-covered valley, as the day nears end they are captured by clouds who sprinkle their magical mist among their weary shoulders, allowing them to rest until the eagles wake them up at the dawn of the new day. They are the three sisters who were turned into stone because of jealousy, hate and deceit, when earth was plush and rivers carried enough fish to fill the bellies of the forest tribes, Morning Woman gave birth to three daughters, all on the same day and Rabbit Hunter her young husband named them Sunshine, Cloud and Rain, they were blessed by the Shaman of their village and revered as the special ones because of their unique births and identical watery reflections. When thirteen summers passed the three sisters were chosen as brides by men of the village, Sunshine was promised to Quick Foot, Cloud was the choice of Star Blazer and Rain was to be the woman of aged widower White Fox, Cloud and Rain loved the same man as Sunshine, Trickster told the three sisters to climb the highest mountain and whoever survived would win Quick Foot as a husband and when all three reached the towering peak Sunshine was enraged and pushed Cloud off the mountain, Rain desired Quick Foot with all her heart, she shoved Sunshine to her death below. Rain satisfied with her deed slowly climbed down the spire of doom while longing for Quick Foot, as she descended Trickster waited behind a tree, he appeared as her beloved and she quickly ran to him and stumbled to her last breath below, at night when the heavens are starless and covered by a cloud blanket and when the birds fluff their feathers and rest from singing one hears the three sisters moaning for Quick Foot. 10/13/18 Fiction - October 2018 Writing Challenge - Poetry Contest

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Date: 3/11/2017 7:28:00 PM
Very creative write Sonia..Congrats on your win
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Sonia Walker
Date: 3/11/2017 10:53:00 PM
Joseph, thank you for your kindness. ~ Sonia
Date: 3/11/2017 7:12:00 PM
Really enjoyed this, great write and win!
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Sonia Walker
Date: 3/11/2017 11:01:00 PM
Greg, your comment on my poem is appreciated. ~ Sonia
Date: 7/26/2016 1:53:00 PM
Sonia, what an impressive story you have created! It is reminiscent of the ancient myths that still linger. I loved it! Congratulations on your third place win. A first place winner for me! 7 ; )
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Sonia Walker
Date: 7/26/2016 2:03:00 PM
Connie, your review makes my heart melt. I appreciate your enthusiasm. ~Sonia
Date: 7/26/2016 10:00:00 AM
A 7 for this GREAT story, with its theme so true! Congrats on your well-deserved win, Sonia. Janice
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Sonia Walker
Date: 7/26/2016 12:02:00 PM
Janice, thanks for the generous rating and encouraging review.
Date: 7/26/2016 8:14:00 AM
Wonderful tale, and I appreciated the message, that actions do have there consequences. Congratulations!
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Sonia Walker
Date: 7/26/2016 8:53:00 AM
Dineen, thank you for reading my poem. I am honored to be placed among the winner's circle. Humbly, Sonia
Date: 7/25/2016 4:53:00 PM
Sonia,, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Sonia Walker
Date: 7/26/2016 12:26:00 AM
Skat, I finally found the winning placement of my poem, "The Legend of the Three Sisters." Thank you for your kind acknowledgement. ~ Sonia
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Sonia Walker
Date: 7/25/2016 5:33:00 PM
SKAT, thank you for your reply. I can't seem to find any notification that my poem won a placement in any of the current contests. Can you be more specific? I appreciate your help.
Date: 4/17/2016 5:50:00 PM
gorgeous story with great use of symbolism.. ohh so wonderful, sonia.. huggs
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Sonia Walker
Date: 4/17/2016 5:53:00 PM
Nette, I appreciate your enthusiastic review. Thank you, Sonia.
Date: 4/16/2016 11:23:00 PM
Excellent writing with a sad tale at the end but that's the way life is sometimes. Nice imagery and I loved it. You are a better writer than I am.
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Sonia Walker
Date: 4/16/2016 11:43:00 PM
Deborah, thank you for for your kind review. Please do not think I am a better writer than you. Each of us has our own style of writing. I have been writing for over thirty years and have recently had my muse knock on my door again. All the best, Sonia.

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