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The Ladder

I Had Once Wrote That I Climbed A ladder. With each Step up, the Rungs turned Into tree limbs Made for squirrels. My sprightly arms And legs transformed Into wrought iron wings. I perched to take to the air Like the glorious albatross, But the weight tugged and Thwarted a new freedom From the physical world. I’m only a nonfictional Descendant from man, Descending a ladder One actual rung at A time. With no Help, alas from A premature Fantasy that Will make Me want To keep Going Up.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/16/2013 8:57:00 PM
Hi David, life always presents us with many uphill climbs, and yes, we must continue upward, Nice structure very fitting for the title. Blessings, Carl
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Date: 12/15/2013 11:56:00 AM
we never know if we are ready unless we try, no matter how heavy the burden
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Date: 12/15/2013 12:41:00 AM
Very interesting poem, but the shape???? ummmmmmm....Is it just me or is that really what I see? CURIOUS!!! Great job. Love the mention of albatross. Beautiful
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David Fisher
Date: 12/15/2013 9:55:00 AM
Thanks for your comments. I agree on the shape issue, but I picked it out of default. A Ninette would be perfect, but only nine lines. I wonder if there is a form out there with increasing/decreasing lines?
Date: 12/14/2013 9:17:00 PM
oh my , now this one is CLEVER and so is its message!! one of the best I have seen tonight!!
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