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The Immoral Beauty

Night falls, and she stood up quickly,
Brushed up swiftly, arranged her
Hair briefly yet attracted, for her 
Beauty, and smooth face like the 
Surface of her chest... 
She walked to the door slowly,
Turned gently, and stirs at herself subtly 
From head to toe, then to her mirror 
Which she earlier disdained.
Her hand bag contained
Preservatives protecting her horror,
Midnight she is a terror,
Daylight, an innocent beauty,
If you see her you will want her
As your lady, to make you matrimonially busy,
And happy.
But, try her and see, you will
Have yourself to blame after burning you up like flame, 
Guys in new york calls her BEACH,
After they tried, but her
Heart they never REACH.
Wall street barons see her and flee, for she stings like a bee,
And her deception, they never 
Want to see.
Las Vegas Cassino is also her prey,
To most night lovers, her tentacles 
She spray.
If she smile you will think she is shy,
If she talks, you hear a nightingale,
But when you look into her profile,
You will find out she is filthy and guilty,
She is the immoral beauty... 


Copyright © Charles Melody Lightning Ink

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  1. Date: 8/8/2011 7:53:00 PM
    Everything that glitters isn't gold.....not too many realize that...... luv it Charles... yet another to add to my favorites...(ydmi)

  1. Date: 11/20/2010 9:50:00 AM
    This sounds like one powerful lady who will prey on what she can get for herself. Nice on the outside but can be cold on the inside. Great write. mom

  1. Date: 11/17/2010 8:04:00 PM
    Am making this one a new fav of mine Charles.. I seem to relate to it too much luv..

  1. Date: 11/15/2010 10:01:00 PM
    a beautiful write, enjoyed,..P.D.

  1. Date: 11/15/2010 12:58:00 PM
    So many times we are fooled by a person's exterior beauty, but you have described a woman with no conscience, one who preys on men. Very powerful poem, dear son!! Love, "mum"

  1. Date: 11/15/2010 11:28:00 AM
    No Linda, this poem is for a night hawker who is clean in the outside and in daylight, but in the real sence, a pandorax box. U are too lovely to be dedicated thus. Love, Lightening Ink.

  1. Date: 11/15/2010 8:47:00 AM
    Wow .. do u know me so well from a previous lifetime? seems u connected on every level ... am I correct is this the one u wrote for me per your blog comment?