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The Homeless Man-Old,Bench,Sleeping-

It's minus thirty-five outside that is with the wind chill, there's an old man at the park who is feeling rather ill. He sits upon a park bench as he has nowhere to go, he needs somewhere to lay his head he gets up, wanders aimlessly to and fro. He is somewhat confused too cold outside to think straight, the beds at the YMCA are full at times like this, there's no break. The moon shines in the sky above as the night grows colder and grim, he knocks on the door at the YMCA they have no more room in there for him. He walks back to the park sits upon the bench and starts weeping, he should be in a place that's warm instead of being out in the cold sleeping. Copyright © Cynthia Jones Jan.3/2014 It's minus 35 outside tonight, with the wind chill factor. Those less fortunate than us, have it a lot harder than we do. We should all keep in mind, that it could be one of us stuck out in the cold, homeless, with nowhere to go and having nowhere to sleep.

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Date: 3/26/2015 12:05:00 PM
WOW, it's all about the cold, in this here poem. I just read your poem Snow, snow go away. So sad to know these cold days, are still here. You paint a vivid picture, the struggle the less fortunate go through... Take Care SKAT
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Date: 4/6/2015 7:06:00 PM
Skat, yes. it sure is all about the cold. Tell me about it. Thank you so very much for stopping by to have a read and leave a comment. I truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
Date: 3/26/2015 8:18:00 AM
This piece was compelling and so striking in its delivery yet carries a hidden strength to move the reader with its compassion. Emile.
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Date: 4/6/2015 7:40:00 PM
Emile, I try my best, not to make the homeless be forgotten. It could be one of us. Thank you so very much for stopping by to have a read and leave a comment. I truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
Date: 3/26/2015 7:05:00 AM
This is great. So sad, and such a heartfelt message for all of us. You are correct it could be any of us out there in the cold. Wonderful write. A 7 from me. Love this
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Date: 4/6/2015 8:20:00 PM
Thank you Janet. Yes. It sure is. They can't be forgotten. Thank you so very much for stopping by to have a read and leave a comment. I truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

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