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The Heart, the Soul

Carried forth between two trees It seems the wind has got the best of me Pushing me off of my two feet I crumble down into the soil The sun licks at me And I gaze tiredly towards the sky Alone between two trees The gap where the sun lies The sun lies Your soul dies Lost it seems, but the direction is clear I suppose the only thing holding me back is fear I try to pull myself back up But the soil sticks to me like glue It beats upon me, abusing my mind My black clothes swelter, I wasn't ready for this The two trees grin upon my woe The dread stays and your soul goes The sun grins Your heart thins I wish I can reach between those trees To stand upon the air - to see what God sees As my woe deepens in the soil Would I not look down upon myself... Only to see me spoil I suppose you can stay where you are After all you are too far To find me and heal I've fallen between two trees and the sun cannot feel But tear the heart And scorch the soul I was carried here Could I be carried once more? Would anyone out there find me? I suppose the one that's far Can heal the scorching scar If one could mend a scorching...torn-up soul If one could bear this heart to hold

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/20/2023 4:42:00 PM
Love the depth of your poems, how you get one to open ones mind
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Date: 11/17/2011 10:55:00 PM
Dear Laura, I'm running out of words to describe YOUR POETIC Art I noticed You receive a LOT of comments From James Paranteau A very fine POET and Carol Brown is my Mentor I wish YOU much success in YOUR POETRY Endeavors LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry
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Date: 6/15/2011 11:33:00 AM
We have so many amazing writers here at PoetrySoup and I enjoy reading all the poems. I am happy your poetry was among the poems I was able to read today Laura. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2011 8:32:00 AM
Your heart and soul...so wrapped up in this write dear poet ! I read it several times to get its full purpose of being spilled on your slip ! I enjoyed very much ! Have a wonderful week Laura ! Much love, james
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