The Great Pyramid of Giza

In the land titled the Gift of the Nile,
where pharaohs rode in gilded chariots,
149 feet she elegantly stands,
in the sandy plains of Giza

For decades long gone,
shes taken the crown;
"the tallest master piece of man's hand"
a Triton amongst Minnows yes indeed,
if thou not believe,the Falcons do
for centuries gone they scaled her sculpture
high enough to see the land of the saints

years and years casing stones were lain,
limestone blocks coalesced in myriads
to form a triangular figure,
firm enough to outlive lake Superior
senile she may be,
she proves that old is gold!
for even the blind behold her in wonder

she dwarfs her surrounding like,
a queen she's always been
casing stones still encircle her
like nestlings before their mother,
and when the moon rises,
she shines like a figure
from wonderland 
and hail to the ancient mathematicians
for designing a figure,
that is food to ones soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 5/2/2013 4:07:00 PM
Much congratulations
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Date: 5/1/2013 2:40:00 PM
Great winning work that you have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading your winning work..Sara
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Date: 4/28/2013 2:19:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/26/2013 9:26:00 PM
Kizito, thank you for the wonderful poem and stunning imagery in my "7 wonders of the world contest." CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for the support. Take Care & Good Night ;-) ~LINDA
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Date: 4/26/2013 8:18:00 PM
What a sparkling, descriptive write. I really enjoyed that! Congrats!
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Date: 4/26/2013 8:14:00 PM
Kizito, congrats with your 7 wonder poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT
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Date: 4/26/2013 7:50:00 PM
Breath-taking poetry, as must be the scene you describe here. Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Kizito. :)
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Date: 4/26/2013 6:46:00 PM
Excellent poem Kitito, you capture the wonder of the Great Pyramid of Giza well, congratulations
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Date: 4/26/2013 5:24:00 PM
Very pretty images here. Great win. J.
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Date: 4/26/2013 12:21:00 AM
Congrats on your win~A.O
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Date: 4/25/2013 9:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...
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