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the flu

yesterday morning i cought the flu
i feel so bad i don't know what to do
the coughing the acheing, who can i sue
this flu is so bad i might pass it to you
it's been a long time sence i felt this sad
even longer sence i felt this bad
and when i'm well and thank God for my health
i remember these moments when the hurting i felt
life is so fragile you can forget to breath
but telling our problems is a delicate need
i ask for your prayers and maybe a quick cure
the bible says ask and it will be given to you
so to all my soup friends that are in my corner
please say a prayer so my health will find order
and if i feel fine by morning i'll see
that some of the soupers really pray for me

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  1. Date: 4/5/2012 12:54:00 PM
    I hope you are feeling better. I am so behind in my reading and commenting. love phyl

  1. Date: 2/8/2012 9:15:00 AM
    I'll pray for a fast recovery... You can write with the flu? You're a stronger person than I am... You're probably already on the mend...

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 5:30:00 AM

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 7:15:00 PM
    John I only tell you this cause it's true, I was one of those that prayed for you. This poem is good with an excellent twist, for I feel you are a gifted poet and are truly blessed.

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 1:04:00 PM
    is it regular flu, I'm-dying-in-the-next-five-minutes flu, bird, swine or man-flu? and does it mean I have to do my florence nightingale routine? well florence has something to brighten your day and make you feel better...

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 7:34:00 PM
    So sorry you're sick, John. I said a prayer for you just now praying that you would recover quickly. God Bless. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 7:24:00 PM
    I'm so sorry to hear you are so sick, John. I do pray you feel much better very soon! God Bless!

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 5:31:00 PM
    Bless you John.Don`t worry about tomorrow.- oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 2/4/2012 4:03:00 PM
    Hope you will be back on your feet real soon, until then, I shall lift you in prayer Blessings in abundance, vie