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The Flame

my soul was touched and i learned deep inside this fire burns i hear her name and it brightens the flame and this will always be the same when i have time my memory defines the things that said she loved me the little clues that she used that little thing, the excuse the why derived of something i always thought that time would wait she knew i loved her but it was too late to love her enough to let her go suffer for my sake? no lord no i traded my tears for her pain i traded years for a wonderful flame everytime i hear her name a thought a memory and what i gained we have something that will always be a deal with death to her from me from death i gained eturnity for now they're just memories but with my memory i keep my love alive a burning flame that testifies

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Date: 9/4/2013 3:54:00 PM
Well said on what she meant to you on this poem. I am so behind in my comments. I will try and catch up. love phyl
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Date: 7/18/2013 9:02:00 AM
love at first sight doesn't always have a happy ending but it never kills the flame, enjoyed your write,
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Date: 7/17/2013 4:22:00 PM
A candle can be burned both ways. It's sad when love is just a phase. What broke your heart cant be undone. When loves a game nobody won.
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Date: 7/16/2013 8:49:00 PM
We ave something that will always be....love that line especially..but the whole thing is awesome.I guess everyone has that person who they never get over....great job..
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