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The First Time I Met Freddy - a Point of No Return

Palms sweaty not knowing what to expect, As I met a stranger from another land, Welcome him willingly not knowing how to react, A costly introduction by a childhood friend, From a tasteless first impression, I let out a sigh, But it starts to hit me as the minutes tick by, He grows on you as the moments peaked high, Start seeing yourself in him, what a solid little guy! An anxious calm begins to flood within, As I sat immersing myself with new sight, The deeper I dwelled, comforts blooming with him, To the point my existence feels exactly right. A whole day spent in the awe of company, Such lucidity in every of our conversations, Everything changed and kept as I fell in reverie, Experiencing life fully in augmentation, As the day end and goodbyes shaking away, I felt new hope, a beginning of something great, Tuning out thankful, his voice fading into play, Never going back from this resurrecting state.

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Date: 1/17/2017 9:49:00 PM
Thank you for reading this and the well wishes. Have you met Freddy yet? ;)
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Date: 12/9/2016 2:19:00 AM
A very good poem well written and a good ending xx
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