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and post notes and photos about your poem like Phillip Garcia.
The objective here was to describe a person you love AND the moment you first realized you loved them in exactly 50 words in a rhyming poem.
Here I'm trying to describe the first time I held my daughter, Lily. She was born on the 4th of July 8 years ago. I had Radiohead's "Pyramid Song" playing when I first got to hold her.
Any help or input is appreciated.