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The First Day Of Winter

Walking down these old familier streets; paths..
On such a Beautiful day, this first day of Winter; clear as serene
Gentle, with His cool subtle breeze ? After the rains, they have all gone away
White floating clouds, scattered amid her sky; blue the sunshine, piercing through 
Infant trees, Radiant, Enchanting as crowns of Light; down Echo Avenue we stroll
Once again of course; Annie, life, Splendour, more ? Near the corner be Elizabeth
I suddenly stop and turn; looking back towards Belmont reaching, trying to touch
What once was mine ? The whistle of a train begins to sound amid the distance
Within that moment, this moment, for an instant, I feel Divinity's rush; Wonderful's 
Love, flowing upon my heart ? Turning back around I then look ahead, and it hits me....
It hits me; how very Majestic, as truly Amazing, Life; with all it's seasons it's years, because
Of others, because of "God;" because of Hope ? How Perfect, Indiscribable,`His Beauty's Gift.  

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  1. Date: 10/24/2013 9:43:00 PM
    "This is beautiful John and thank you for the kind comments on my poems, it means a lot:) love Priyanka"

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 4:23:00 PM
    This is the one that I love so much. Ah, those moments, if we could just live within them... Your poetry expressions are so excellently written that I almost felt the rush ad excitement with you. And that my poetic friend is what makes good poetry tremendously enjoying. Bravo! Lucinda

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 9:21:00 PM
    Very uplifting John. I so needed to read something like this , this eveing. Its a very beautiful poem. Thank you so very much for sharing this gem.. Nite, Lucinda