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A Costly Toll

Should I thank lightning for its fire, or praise the wind when it's blowing? For without fire, we'd all expire, and the wind keeps the air flowing. Fire demolishes all with ease and when winds wail, ships oft get tossed. And nothing can ever appease the grief felt for a loved one lost. Should I worship the sun and rain, are they not worthy of my praise? Showers bring waters that sustain us and the sun warms with its rays. Downpours swell rivers and souls drown, while deserts bake under the sun. And floods send houses crashing down, while droughts kill more than any gun. In times of war and upheaval, does God decree the fate of Man? Should I not blame Him for evil, isn't it all part of His plan? Yin-yang, good-bad, is known to all, stitched in the fabric of our soul. But when religion makes the call, faith can levy a costly toll. (Quatrain) 4/13/2015

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Date: 5/13/2018 9:48:00 AM
I love the imagery here, Emile.
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Date: 4/13/2015 9:09:00 PM
Deep and beautiful write. Man, a fallen creature has the chance to decide his fate. Accept the gift and be made whole once again.. Faith and love spring from above. A7 and awesome poem..
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Date: 4/14/2015 9:28:00 AM
Thanks so much Robert, your encouraging words are most welcome. Emile.
Date: 4/13/2015 2:56:00 PM
brilliantly done, I like your writing style you get a 7 from me, so keep up the good writes so I can enjoy your reads, and God blees LB
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Date: 4/13/2015 3:39:00 PM
Thanks Louis, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 4/13/2015 2:03:00 PM
- I do not believe God decides the weather - God has nothing to do with war ! - I believe in fate, and put the blame on people on earth when it comes to war - When it comes to the weather ..... we have to hope for the best: ) - accept what comes :) - A really well written poem, Emile ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/13/2015 2:06:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise, your comments are always most welcome. Emile.
Date: 4/13/2015 12:55:00 PM
Truly awesome. The last stanza is so deep..."good bad reside in you, woven in fabric of your soul" ...beautiful..#7
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Date: 4/13/2015 1:31:00 PM
Thanks Nandita, most people are basically good, evil is an acquired taste. Emile.
Date: 4/13/2015 9:21:00 AM
All of these answers can be found in the bible. It is our faith that keeps us moving on! Great poetry! A 7
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Date: 4/13/2015 11:58:00 AM
Thanks Anna, I appreciate your support. Emile.

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