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I am the falling star within your dream and upon your beauty my lights will stream glittering fluttering a thousand lamps falling and shimmering Dream under the night sky firmament all the bright stars are Heaven's ornaments oh just dream, dear with not a fear I will hover close and kiss every tear Sweet dreams, just drift and float quietly beyond the stars dwells God's eternity see it feel it oh God's paradise promised, moonlit Birds twittering and lovely in trees and upon your lips you whisper please must stay till day will this sweet paradise be mine, I pray Each night you can drift to heaven Close your eyes and count to seven ______________________________________ April 11, 2016 Poetry/Rhyme/The Falling Star - Answer Me Copyright Protected, ID 16-776-979-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Inspiration - Stars Are Our Link To The Great Beyond; And God Himself, written by Mystic Rose For the contest, Answer Me sponsor, Mystic Rose Second Place

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Date: 4/28/2016 12:46:00 AM
Broken, Congrats on your win in Mystic's contest. *LINDA*
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Constance La France
Date: 4/28/2016 7:37:00 AM
Linda, thanks for the congrats ~|~
Date: 4/22/2016 4:58:00 AM
Wonderful poetry n win Broken.. big congrats
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Constance La France
Date: 4/24/2016 10:12:00 PM
upma thanks for the wonderful and congrats
Date: 4/21/2016 9:58:00 AM
Congratulation my lovely friend on your beautiful win. Loved always, bl
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Constance La France
Date: 4/24/2016 10:11:00 PM
bl thanks for the congratulations and the beautiful
Date: 4/21/2016 6:18:00 AM
Congratulations B/W fine win...
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Constance La France
Date: 4/24/2016 10:10:00 PM
Charlie thanks for the congrats
Date: 4/15/2016 2:52:00 PM
Excellent poem bearing rhythm of true heart core. Good luck with 7+ my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Constance La France
Date: 4/15/2016 5:02:00 PM
BL, thanks for the excellent and the love and the 7+ !
Date: 4/12/2016 12:57:00 PM
1...2...3...4...drifting to heaven with this heavenly write Broken Wings! "Heaven's ornaments"...love this line!
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Constance La France
Date: 4/13/2016 12:12:00 AM
Walter, thanks for reading my poem and the heavenly, I like that particular line also ~
Date: 4/11/2016 8:28:00 PM
Wonderful answer B/W. Best wishes for your success in the contest...
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Constance La France
Date: 4/11/2016 9:44:00 PM
Charlie, thanks for visiting with the wonderful !
Date: 4/11/2016 8:04:00 PM
Enjoyed your answer Constance. Good luck. Peace nice lady:)
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Constance La France
Date: 4/11/2016 9:45:00 PM
Daniel, thanks so much for visiting my poem :)

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