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The Eyes

In your eyes so clear,
I see the hope of men,
In your eyes like a butterfly, 
I see the colors of success.
In your eyes,mixed with love,
Vision and passion,
A dream has emerged,
A dream is growing,
In your eyes,locked on mine,
I see bliss standing.
Only in your eyes....

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  1. Date: 12/10/2010 5:30:00 AM
    wow when i was a child,, i would see my dreams growing,, with no emerging sounds. the sweet things in life where the butterflies...success what a beautiful passion mixing with hope is all gone if you look into my eyes now,,, enjoying you today,.p.d.

  1. Date: 10/30/2010 6:51:00 AM
    thanks phyl,i only concluded that was"poetic justice",however i will see to correcting all my poetic errors...pls don't ever stop correcting me...thanxxx phyl.

  1. Date: 10/29/2010 3:32:00 PM
    In the third line from the bottom I know what you mean but it doesn't sound right. Maybe something like "in your eyes locked on mine" . Otherwise an excellent write and well penned. Phyl

  1. Date: 10/29/2010 1:41:00 PM see such hope and dreams in someone's eyes!! Lovely!

  1. Date: 10/29/2010 7:51:00 AM
    Hi CM, thanks for taking the time to read my words. I particularly enjoyed this piece, anything to laud love, I am a part. It is wonderful when we see love as a blessing in and through 'the other'. Welcome to Soup, by the way, first I have read your write. Good job. Luv, Joy (Jew)

  1. Date: 10/29/2010 7:50:00 AM
    I like these words, filled with passion ! much love, james

  1. Date: 10/29/2010 6:21:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your work!! Thanks for commenting on my works. Hope I am too much in a nice way?? ;)