The Eye

Roaming eyes Innermost seer Who can hide?

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/17/2011 7:10:00 AM

Much truth and wise words Charles .. good luck if your contest entry for Rick my friend... appreciate all your lovely comments on my work ....

Carol Fillmore

Date: 2/3/2011 10:19:00 AM

excellent haiku! really enjoyed this:) Charles, thanks for your lovely comment on haiku for all seasons! much appreciated:)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/29/2011 7:23:00 AM

Who can hide from God's eye and that is no one. He sees all and knows all. Enjoyed this poems this morning. love mom

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/28/2011 7:10:00 PM

Hello Charles, hope you are well. Enjoyed reading your work.

Kash Poet

Date: 1/28/2011 6:26:00 PM

Just wonderful!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2011 3:24:00 PM

Sounds ominous! Hi there, Charles, yes long time no see. I will have to see if you have any other recent poems for me to read!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/28/2011 3:06:00 PM

Interesting thoughts with intricate conclusions Charles... makes one truly think ... happy weekend luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/28/2011 1:15:00 PM

Fantastic observation interpreted and worded well, Charles,

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/28/2011 11:54:00 AM

Good one..For some this is true...God's eyes are a different thing though...Thanks for stopping by my work about "Canadian Geese"...No I am not from Canada...Canadian Geese are migratory bird..I live in a path where they travel every year twice a year..In the spring going north and in the fall or early winter going south..Thanks for asking...Sara