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''The Essence of Your Love'' Revised

The essence of your love is wrath,-- a gale, a tempest: a stormy path! It is the breath and soul of God, a being whose vengeance is broad. It is a thunderous, loud peal-- a thunderclap that we both feel; it is a storm that blasts our coasts, destroying all that we love most. It is a menacing, strong squall that bodes misfortune for us all; it is an angry hurricane that creates misery and pain. In peace, it pacifies your anger and warms us all without danger: the essence of your love’s now new,-- a source of heat that burns so true!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/26/2014 6:30:00 PM
NGOC, Congratulations with your beautiful essence of love win. Have yourself a good one. Love ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 2/21/2014 10:35:00 AM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 2/21/2014 4:23:00 AM
Lovely write on the essence of love and congrats on the fine win, ngoc
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Date: 2/20/2014 10:29:00 PM
wow, a powerful poem and a different take on the theme!! I loved the read. Congrats for your win.
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