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The Dream Captured

A deep sleep guided me to the land of quizzical Where the hallucination acted immortal as the souls from delusional Those who ever filled the classic story of our time Declared their presence in the shackles of uncertainty I embraced my desire within I found my anguish bloomed betwixt I sank into the soul of crisis Sensing the seconds of my fragility Those lifeless souls grasp me there Grasp depth as they would never be seen, again A moment I was awakened from the dream Along with the shadow which deserted to be fade And the sense still there.. obscure... My longing which buried by despair Melting as the tears fell down And let the dots of my dream be a dwelling place for my stained soul And let those retentions sealed in every pieces of the journey Author's Note: For the deceased beloved Father (November 13, 2002) For the deceased beloved Sister (February 27, 2011)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/6/2012 9:01:00 PM
your grief is really felt here. Such a sad poem and so poetic, Yanny. i enjoyed also what you said to me about snow.
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Date: 12/4/2012 4:25:00 PM
Yanny, a heartfelt poem.. thank you for sharing this awesome poem. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. Hope to read more of your poems tomorrow. take care~:-) LINDA
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/4/2012 4:27:00 PM
Thank you Linda your visits always brings new spirit for me :), I hope you have a wonderful day as well
Date: 12/4/2012 12:24:00 PM
Wow, this is powerful! so sorry for your loss. Your poem is exquisite, you are getting better and better. So pleased to be the first to comment on this beautiful piece.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/4/2012 4:00:00 PM
Thank you Richard, if it's not because of the poetry soup I will not as improved as now :), people in here inspired me a lot and ecourage me to write more included you :D

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