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The Door To Wayra

I swoop down from sky flying in on a light breeze that whispers sweet promises. Touching down on lush ground, I open the door to Wayra. Led to a forest, I’m drifting with a river that murmurs ancient secrets. The door has led me home among the birds of Paradise. Written 7/17/14 by Andrea Dietrich for the Door to a Wayra Poetry Contest of nette onclaud (imagining a place with the same name as this poetry form that comes from South America!)

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Date: 10/23/2014 4:40:00 PM
Nice one could see myself drifting on this poem. love phyl
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Date: 7/29/2014 12:42:00 PM
Awesome win, Andrea... , Congratulations, on making Nette's winning list. She's a tough judge. Take Care, LINDA :)
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Date: 7/26/2014 10:36:00 AM
Don't know how I missed this one, it is a beautiful poem my friend, congratulations
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Date: 7/26/2014 1:09:00 AM
Wow! Big congrats with this great win.
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Date: 7/25/2014 10:18:00 PM
Sweet music! Andrea!
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Date: 7/25/2014 8:29:00 PM
splendid write, ANdrea! you brought me to that magical place. thanks for opening the door with your words :)
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Date: 7/25/2014 2:08:00 PM
i did research on wayra and incan culture, andie.. you brought this place to life; beautiful imagery!.. your high win in my contest gladdens me.. congrats and huggs!
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Date: 7/25/2014 12:01:00 AM
Pretty and sweet. I enjoyed your write and congratulations on your win. God bless you.
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Date: 7/24/2014 10:29:00 PM
And back again wid huge congrats Andrea! splendid work indeed!
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Date: 7/24/2014 6:41:00 PM
Wonderful Andrea...especially love the river section...congrats
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Date: 7/24/2014 5:00:00 PM
back for one more read and with Congratulations...on a very merited top win!!
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Date: 7/24/2014 1:55:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/24/2014 12:25:00 PM
Totally awesome win beautiful! loved the poem, you are such an artist with your words! :)
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Date: 7/24/2014 11:20:00 AM
Like Robert, I found it difficult to contain myself...Andrea, you have done well and what a creative idea of a place called Wayra. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/24/2014 9:38:00 AM
This to me is an amazing write! To get this message across so well in such a short poetry form is truly astounding! Huge congrats on this great win and I see such extremely strong writes were entered! A very well deserved win!! BBBBBRRRAAVVVoooooooo!!!!
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Date: 7/24/2014 9:32:00 AM
A beautiful take on this contest, Andrea !! it is beautiful !! :) congrats to you!
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Date: 7/24/2014 8:26:00 AM
Loveed this imaginative write and so happy to see it on the winners list!.. Congrats, dear Andrea!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/24/2014 7:00:00 AM
Interesting way to go to the Wayra..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 7/24/2014 6:28:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats. Hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/24/2014 6:01:00 AM
My heartfelt congrats on this fine win, Andrea
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Date: 7/20/2014 10:09:00 AM
It really works, Andrea. Before you go to sleep ask to remember your dream and that it be flying. Love, Dave
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Date: 7/20/2014 12:57:00 AM
Excellent. Well imagery and thoughtful write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 7/19/2014 11:54:00 PM
Dear Andrea: Nice. Short. Sweet. All the best in Nette's contest. 0:) Leon
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Date: 7/19/2014 11:11:00 AM
This fine flying piece reminds me of a dream I had where I was flying. It was so real because I had requested it before I dropped off. The experience is quite unique. Love, Dave
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Date: 7/19/2014 5:55:00 AM
Beautiful write Andrea...best wishes
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